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for The Gilded Cage

by ApollinaV

schedule December 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
My gosh, it just hit me like a ton of bricks! He's a snake. I can't believe I forgot that.
schedule December 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
EW. Pickled walnuts?

Ick. Lol, but I'm on to the next chapter! :D
schedule December 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Fresh boomslang sheddings--that's a bit like using your own toenail clippings--eew! But REALLY funny! Still, at least the gaurds are treating him better, with her showing up and being nice to them.
schedule December 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! And I may seem thick, but I cant help it... what is his other form? :/

Ah, cold beer and pizza. :] Yum. Much better than that pickled stuff :P
schedule December 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule December 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
haha my name is Kathleen and i am very grateful to be mentioned as the witch who gave so much pleasure to our delectable Severus. happy to be of service to him any time ;)
i'm loving this story and i can't wait for Monday!
schedule December 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ha ha lol i dont know what to say im to outdone i know she is too hahahaha good one!!!!
person marcia
schedule December 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Boomslang?! Oh, my. *snicker* Certainly interesting dynamics going on. I'm looking forward to more.
schedule December 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"Yes dear." Hah! Fantastic! I love it... please please please continue soon.
schedule December 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aldfknaldkbgvadblg! Two! SCORE! I didn't get a chance to read during the holidays and I come to check and there are two! I really like you. =]

I'm beginning to really like Hermione's character, at first she irritated me. Now that the plot is allowing for it, I'm starting to appreciate her. Beautiful writing as always.