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for The Gilded Cage

by ApollinaV

schedule December 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice twist, I hadn't thought of using AD's portrait as a source. You have a twisty mind and I'm really loving this.
schedule December 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
With each chapter you write, I love your story more and more. I'm quite curious to know what is going to be Hermione's decision now... after all, all that she believed about her husband is a sham and all of best laid her plans are getting screwed up... the know-it-all doesn't know anything after all. It's great to read about it. XD
schedule December 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just love this story. You are incredibly talented, dear.
person amd2175
schedule December 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Have to say, love the latin. I wanted to take it in high school but sadly they did not allow us to when I came of age. GREAT story! When I see you have updated it gives me pleasure. Keep writing :-)
schedule December 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh good! Although I was fully prepared to accept evil Snape, I'm relieved to read this might not be the case after all.
schedule December 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awww dang i feel bad for them, its true in times of war we do what we must to survive no matter how bad it looks. now she'll show some love to snape. it's called growing up for her.
person CB13
schedule December 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Swimming along beautifully. And be kind to not-so-constant reviewers; we don't all have laptops at our fingertips.

I mean it - you're really developing these two brilliantly. Keep up the good work and happy new year!

Cheers
CB
person elladee
schedule December 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I started reading this story yesterday (the large number of reviews lured me in) and at first I wasn't too sure how I felt about your portayal of Hermione... but the setup of this story was very intriguing from the get-go so I continued reading. And now I'm glad I did! I like the direction things are going in, and how Severus and Hermione are slowly connecting. Very interesting stuff! I'm liking these longer chapters as well, the pacing feels a lot better when the scenes aren't so divided.

I look forward to reading the next chapter~! Thanks for a great story!!
schedule December 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was too funny! And I can see why she'd be so grossed out by the boomslang skin. You have to wonder though, does that constitute as cannibalism do you think? lol Great update, I can't wait for more!!
schedule December 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I don't think I quite got what Snapes Animagus form was. Care to clarify for the slower students in class?

Cheers on the chapter though. I was so crossing my fingers that something would happen between the two.