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for The Gilded Cage

by ApollinaV

schedule December 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AV -

Im a terrible reviewer so you will have to forgive me if my reviews seem sporradic, I AM actually reading it regularly Im just horrible at reviewing and easily distracted...hey, I have 3 kids, what can you expect right?LOL


I am really enjoying this so far. I will admit I was almost afraid to click on it at first, here lately I have been so disappointed in the things that have been posted. But I am so glad I did, I was really desperate for something to entertain me and hold my attention, so thanks for that. ;) anyhow, you are doing a wonderful job with your story and I look forward to reading more....anxiously waiting for that first kiss....I love first kisses (in fiction and in real life), nothing compares to a first kiss. ***sigh***


Happy Writing!!!!
~SG~
person jlclark
schedule December 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent!! I have really enjoyed the story so far. Marriage law plots can get a bit old but this is very interesting and refreshingly original; I love it that you have had them keep their distance from one another for so long instead of being so
schedule December 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You are truly spectacular! Thank you for a wonderful story. I do hope you update soon!
schedule December 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I knew it. Stupid noble men! Stupid self-punishing men! Stupid Severus!

*face -> desk*

Well, at least there is a way out, eh?

Good chapter, luv. Cant wait to hear what happens next! :}

schedule December 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So. She finally knows. So what's she going to do now I wonder?
schedule December 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah, sigh. Haha, I loved the gag reflex on the Boomslang thing. And what's the deal with Billy and the other guards? More please! ~M
person neelix
schedule December 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my... this chapter had my heart-strings twanging away - she's finally seeing the real Severus and accepting that all is not as it seems.... goodness but I hope she can persuade him to leave Azkaban - after all, there is only so much they can do in his cell, right???

Brilliant writing as usual... can't wait for the next installemnt.
schedule December 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule December 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for clarifying Snape's animagus form. It figures he'd be a highly poisonous snake.
person Cyrielle
schedule December 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant.