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OK so I was pissed that the lemons haven't appeared yet, but I see your reasoning...the plot would certainly be sacrificed. I am really liking this story now, and I'm so hoping that Snape will be exonerated before long! Keep it comin sister!

You know, each time I read a new chapter I am struck by the poetic way you link all the words together into clever little sentences. Subsequently I feel my own writing paling into insignificance... this is truly an amazing bit of work, honey.

I wouldn't worry about the late updates - hunger is good sauce!

This is a wonderful story. I really enjoyed reading it this far. I normally don't read WIP because I fear they will never get completed. I hope you continue to update your story. I am eager to read more.

Molly just doesn't get it, does she? One tough cookie, but she simply can't imagine anyone not wanting the life she herself has had. In a way, neither can Ginny, really. I do like the idea of Harry and Oliver together, I get tired of the Drarry scenario now and then. Good chapter, and Happy New Year to you, too!

I love how your chapters finish. THey always leave me waiting for more. I think I have said it before but I love that you have not gone for the smut story. The build up of the relationship is great. Can't wait to see Severus in the next chapter.

hummm well .....that was...............nice.

Ay, I love this story, it captivates and I hope you add more soon. =]

Ohh golly, this can take so many beautiful turns, I can't wait.

I'm intrigued. Truly, your talent has me captivated. I can't wait to see what happens when she goes to talk to Severus. =] eee!

I apologize now for not being a more consistent reviewer. I hesitated to start reading the story because I was feeling 'Wedding Law' fatigue, if you know what I mean (the irony being that when I get more story finished, I have a wedding law story almost ready to start posting!) However, once I started reading I was hooked! Just when I think that the idea cannot be done in a unique way, a long comes this story.
I am especially enjoying how you are building up the relationship between Hermione and Severus, and that they have not had to comply to any sort of consummation clause. I get the sense that when they do become intimate, it will be all the more meaningful because they are, unintentionally perhaps, forming a strong friendship first. This last chapter when Hermione speaks to the solicitor was particularly compelling. If his assumed guilt might be the one thing that would keep Hermione from getting closer to Severus, you are destroying that obstacle very nicely. Looking forward to the next chapter!