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for The Gilded Cage

by ApollinaV

schedule January 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
LOL. Snape and his Slinky...sounds like an interesting story title all of its own. Imagine, a brillant mind captivated by a simple toy. Wonderful.

Red
schedule January 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved the dream sequence! Very original and more Jungian than Freudian. I see that they have yet to realize how alike they are; he wants redemption and she wants justification. Do you have any idea how impatient I get waiting for your updates? I am VERY much hooked.
schedule January 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Kudos! This is truly redemptive. I don't think I've ever read one as successful as yours is. Good job! More fic please!

schedule January 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You're right I loved the chapter :)
person Gertie
schedule January 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I was in agony awaiting the latest chapter and now that it's here I am so happy. I like the idea of Hermione being Severus's redeption. I am so interested to see where you take this story. My mind is reeling as I impatiently wait for more chapters. I'm greedy I know...
person CB13
schedule January 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Finally reading on something other than my mobile. Kudos to you - this really is wonderful. I adore the pace: slow and realistic. You painted quite a clear picture in these two chapters covering Christmas morning. Granted, your audience has a clear idea of the atmosphere when you tell them the action takes place in Azkaban, but you did a good job at rendering it particularly bleak here.

Sorry, no meaty review here. Just gushing. Thanks for writing!

Cheers

CB
schedule January 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Soooo, this is awesome! Seriously it doesn't come fast enough for me! Stuff of this quality keeps me going on those boring work days. So thanks for having a great talent and sharing it with the rest of us! Please update soon! This is one of my favorite HG/SS fics in a while.
schedule January 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The more you write the more I like it. The study of guilt and sin. It reminds me a bit of a Russian writer's work called 'Felony and penalty' (I'm not sure about the title it's my own rough translation and not from the original. But it was written long time ago by Fiodor Dostojewski)Hope it will only get more interesting and 'real' (at least as real as ff can go :D)
Take care,
Belle
schedule January 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow... you continue to turn this story over and over and over... delightful! Thanks! Now, more please!

schedule January 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sweet. So what's her Christmas present, and will it make her feel horribly guilty now? And poor Billy. I just wanted to cry. So Hermione's going to make him into a project too now, isn't she? I can just see it coming... :D More please! ~M