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September 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
'Hermione now understood why fairy tales ended with a kiss."
I love the truisms you have written throughout this story and how you go about exploring what they mean to each character. Absolutely fabulous writing.
I love the truisms you have written throughout this story and how you go about exploring what they mean to each character. Absolutely fabulous writing.
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September 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful job. It was perfect. I've really enjoyed this story. It had humor, angst, romance, sex and plain craziness. Not to mention the author (that's you!) could spell, put a sentence together, keep the characterization consistent, and wrote believable dialogue. You should be proud. Lots of hugs, kisses and chocolate!
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September 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful, wonderful wonderful!
I love Severus' worst case scenario technique, I'll have to try it.
I wonder whether the triplets will make an appearance in the epilogue?
What a journey! I am so glad you took us along on the ride!
I love Severus' worst case scenario technique, I'll have to try it.
I wonder whether the triplets will make an appearance in the epilogue?
What a journey! I am so glad you took us along on the ride!
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September 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. I can't wait to read the epilogue to this wonderful story. I think it would be great if Hermione did end up having triplets, but not all girls. I think she should have two girls and one boy. Update soon.
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September 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is just so beautifully written... I love your little slice-of-life moments. That was the most perfect ending I could have hoped for; I loved it and wouldn't change a single syllable. I got so wrapped up in it that I'm rather sad to see the end coming into view. I'll be waiting for your epilogue, though. Bring on the triplets!
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September 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
AV! You're back!!!! I hope everything's alright...
Lol! Sev is trying to look for pregnancy? After just a night?
Yay! Thumbs up for no guilt or shame!!!
I love it how he's just convinced himself that they're going to have triplets. I think Hermione would freak out a little at the thought of 3 at once...
It was a nice ending... well almost ending. There's still an epilogue! Yay!
Wow! One handed beta-ing. Christev is amazing :D
Lol! Sev is trying to look for pregnancy? After just a night?
Yay! Thumbs up for no guilt or shame!!!
I love it how he's just convinced himself that they're going to have triplets. I think Hermione would freak out a little at the thought of 3 at once...
It was a nice ending... well almost ending. There's still an epilogue! Yay!
Wow! One handed beta-ing. Christev is amazing :D
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September 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
She liiiiiiiveeesss !!! Never mind the aurors, I was ready to send a howler with a tracking spell! LOL It was most DEFINITELY WORTH IT! I love the idea of Severus and Hermione as an old married couple. It is always fun to think of them trying to get used to each other, especially in the bathroom. And kids, wow, triplets would just make his day wouldn't it? He will be a great dad. lol Thank you Madame! And now the epilogue.(smiling evilly and rubbing her hands in excitement). Sad to think that this is coming to an end. But look at it this way, we can look forward to harrassing you for more on your next story! How's that? Keep 'em comin'!
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September 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
such a hoot to read!!!
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September 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I thought it WAS perfect--Severus midnight anxiety attack, the irrational desire to bar his hypothetical daughter's windows, the thumping heart attack when you realize that normalcy has begun in all its dizzying variety. Perfect. And you even found a solution to the problem of the Kissed and the dirty Warden. Frankly I think a year is being optimistic. Somebody is going to knife him. Yay. Will wait for the last (sob) of it with bated breath!
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September 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for a wonderful story.