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for The Gilded Cage

by ApollinaV

person Gertie
schedule January 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
How did you guess my evil plan? I would love to kidnap you and force foamy chai lattes on you until you write more chapters for me, but I
person wudelfin
schedule January 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
nice, now she is his muse to say the least.
schedule January 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So, Severus is getting it out of his system and Hermione is ready to get a life. For her to be only slightly concerned that something could be interfering with the running of *their* business is reason for hope.

Things are looking up, then?

Brilliant point about wizarding culture. I had always wondered why Muggle-borns just get tossed into Diagon Alley and are told to float or sink. There should be a class for all of them at least from first to third year.

Great Job!
schedule January 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sniggering, "Your Muggle is showing ..."

Quite right.

Severus the theologian is fascinating.

Won't discuss religion either. Learned that EARLY in life. Religion and politics were always two topics of conversation that ALWAYS ended up with drunks yelling at each (or worse) in the family's bar.

Swinging my Terrible Towel in wild circles. Here we go, Steelers!

I'll be interested to see where you take the theological debate next.
schedule January 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Loved it, Hun. Beautifullly written. And I absolutley love the idea
Of him writing a novel. :) LOVE IT :)
person Anon
schedule January 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Severus strikes me as a Minerva-worshipper (no pun intended): Intellect, cold passion, war and espionage, logic, strategy, knowledge as applied in the real world, pragmatism in the extreme. She was also rather touchy and had no sense of humor (remember what she did to Arachne?). He had to be under sombody's aegis to have survived, after all. His memoir will be a best-seller, that's for sure.
schedule January 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
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person Gertie
schedule January 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Come on! The foam is the best part- if made correctly. This psycho-stalker would love to send you a drink for updating when I was really not expecting you to.

I love the new take on Death Eater recruitment, and the idea of Snape with a tramp stamp had me giggling into my coffee. Although he loves his Hermoine baiting, it seems he can resist when she unintentionally does it to him, until she pityies him. I really am dying for some loving soon.

My husband has always been good with the gift giving, I
person MooMandy
schedule January 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Glad you're enjoying my fair state! You should see it when everything's green- very beautiful indeed! Loving the story! Can't wait to see where all this leads. Hope Snape and Hermione have a bangin' Valentine's. Gotta go make snow angels w/ the brood; we did get the snow and ice! And more snow tomorrow- yay. Happy writing, luv!!! Salud! Killer K
schedule January 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I haven't left a note in a while and I just want to say that I simply go ecstatic every time I see a new post. I can't wait for the next.