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Oh my god, this chapter completely cracked me up. From the "ass end of Britian" to elves disparanging remarks to the elves being named after Disney characters... way perfect. I'm dying to know how much Snape has to do with the elf behavior, so his mother named them but what has Snape contributed....? Great chapter.

OH.MY.GOD.

Ohh! This is getting good. Sev is writing a book and 'Mione is getting sued, I can't wait until the next update.
You are such an excellent writer, I'm so glad I didn't continue to pass this story by.

Finally, Hermione is going home! lol... Brilliant twist. Now we just need Severus out of Azkaban so he can help her properly with the business... right?? Or am I jumping ahead? How long is the story going to be??

What will it take to make Severus leave his prison?

The Prince estate bustling with life sounds like a good reason...

And I think I know that Scandinavian furniture/secret Arithmancy company by heart.

Nice chapter, the plot is thickening - great job!

Hi! I'm new to your fanfiction and have enjoyed it immensely!! I love the way you capture how Hermione has always been in my head and heart. The way you write Snape is new and I love it. The writing is great and flows very well. I am already anxiously awaiting the next chapter. You captured my interest with your version of the marriage laws and your writing style. I have been on adultfanfiction before but lost my old information as it was a round robin one with a friend... If you need a beta I would happily volunteer my services! You have captured my inner Snape/Granger addiction!!! Waiting on pins and needles for more!!!
Sincerly,
NeoSiberian

I hope I didn't offend you last time. If I did, I am sorry. If it is any consolation, I still believe that you are one of the best... the best, best, best of the best! lol. Anyway, I try to be as honest in my perceptions as I can, because I hope and desire and pray that everyone else is being just as honest with me. If I say some discouraging things sometimes, that doesn't mean that I think any less of your fic. After all, I did say that it was one of my favorites. In fact, you are currently my number 2 favorite fic. Good job, and continue soon!!!!

Hey AV

I'm back and have been catching up on chapters. I'm so glad that Hermione is off the liquid sunshine, she really was acting like an addict.

Ginny Duck? I think I like the sound of Ginny Mulciber better. I hope it works out.

Rini

Three cheers for the redoubtable Mr. ffolkes! Not to mention how cleverly he got her to move into Severus' house. I hope her employees aren't too upset when they come to work and find the place cleaned out, though. That can be a little upsetting.

Ooh, I liked this (even if we didn't see anything of Severus - I hope we get to see more of him next chapter) Hermione finally moving into his home, and her blood up >:)

How will Snape react to all those workers being in on the Secret, I wonder (two worked up people, alone in an enclosed room... well, a girl can dream :D )