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for The Gilded Cage

by ApollinaV

person neelix
schedule February 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Disney... that was inspired writing! I am still grinning... and I assume Severus could feel her laughter? Hope it cheered him up, the miserable old bugger.
schedule February 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my Goddess!! Thank you so much!! I don't think i've had such a good belly laugh in yonks!! The secret world of Disney. Brilliant!!!
I'm eager to see how Severus can use his new gift to manipulate. Coz he's a ringer for it. Deffo his style.
schedule February 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Cute. Totally cute! You are outstanding and I deeply loved this chapter. Thanks, and please do write more!
person Mmoirai
schedule February 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA *gasp* AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! That's awsome! "The Magical World of Disney". Priceless!
schedule February 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Okay, wait...I am still giggling like a mad hyena...that was gloriously brilliant! Thank you so much for a much needed laugh tonight!
schedule February 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*rolls on the floor unable to get up*

I love those house elves. Brilliant, just brilliant.

And poor Severus, having his magical nervous system trampled by constant trespassing.

I can't wait for the day he walks out of there shows up in here, no their bedroom and bends her over, as he was so nicely fantasizing about.
schedule February 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hell yeah, I rock the magical kingdom as well. Wow this chapter couldn't have gotten any funnier.....
schedule February 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
(gasping for a tortured breath) I bow in delight before your irredeemably twisted and undoubtably psychopathic cynicism; Ambrose Bierce couldn't have pulled off a better example of a sardonic parody. Hughie...Louie...Dewey...'Spawn of Trolls?' Have no mercy! Lay on, Macduck! ROFLMAO! Maniacal laughter continues, boyfriend is confused.
schedule February 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ha! Loved the names of the elves not to mention the *affectionate* nicknames they came up with for Hermione. I had a good giggle at Huey, Dewey and Louie!

The connection Severus has to his home, being able to figure out how Hermione is feeling is gonna be a lot of fun, I think. I can't wait till their next meeting.
schedule February 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think your elves must be the most adoring, exasperating and amusing elves in fanfic history. If there was some kind of contest about such things, I