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for The Gilded Cage

by ApollinaV

schedule September 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved this very much. You did a wonderful job. I made sure to add this to my faves list. I look forward to reading more of your works. =)
schedule September 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have only 1 word for this epic......STUNNING!!!
Onwards to the next.
Blessings
Amethystique xxx
schedule September 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
As they say: 'AAAAWWWWW!' perfect ending, I think. I laughed at Tink being the only elf left, you'd think Severus' self-preservation instinct would have meant he kept at least a couple of them for nappy duty!
schedule September 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yes, yes, yes! All loose ends tied up. Jake ends up with Draco. Ornery Tink still smoking in the gardens. Severus and Hermione are living happily ever after with their unruly children, and giving some loving back to the wizarding world.

This was an utterly amazing epic. You know the best part? Come closer so I can whisper the answer in your ear... not only did I get hours of reading enjoyment from this story, but I made a friend. AV, you are funny, intelligent, thoughtful, sassy and sweet, and it shines through in your quality writing. Woot and squee to nth degree!!! Bravo!!!
schedule September 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was a wonderful story. I enjoyed reading it.
schedule September 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT! I gotta say when you didn't update for so long I began to worry, but I continued to check in religiously. What did I get for my perserverience? Not one, but two excellent chapters upon my return from the Bulgarian hinterlands! I'm so happy and incrediably pleased at how the story ended. Like any good love affair, I'm sad it ended but will be more than pleased to revisit it in the future, simply for the pleasure it gave me! Thanks again and I look forward to trying the Goat Cheese!
schedule September 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was such an enjoyable story. It had romance and angst. Heartbreak and joy. Thank you for sharing it with us. I'm looking forward to your next story.
person Vilpax
schedule September 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved the story! I waited impatiently for each chapter and squealed like a school girl when they were finally posted!! It was great. Thank you for the nice ride!
schedule September 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I read this on Thursday, then forgot to review. Bad Clairvoyant!

Severus is too funny, already thinking about triplet Gryffindors. What a fatalist.

I like how you put the sexy!shower to use for sex! Lemony scented, indeed.

Can't wait to see the epilogue to see how life turns out for all my faves: Jake and Tink included.

I'm sad to see this end, but this has been such an excellent, thought-provoking, funny, sexy, epic story. What will the mind of ApollinaV churn out next?
person Monddame
schedule September 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi!
Just came across this today and read...the whooole thing. Whew.
And it is fantastic. I found myself laughing so often at your little descriptions and sarcastic wit. And the plot/psychology of the thing is spectacular. I find that relationship motivation is the most lacking aspect of most SS/HG fics, but your premise and its execution are wholly believable. And for some reason, I can completely see Hermione developing a chemical dependence.
Plus, Jake was so amusing. It made me rethink my position on Hufflepuffs.
Marvelous, indeed. So I thought I'd let you know that I've put this on my 'Recommended Readings', and tell you how much I supremely enjoyed this story. Good work!