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for The Gilded Cage

by ApollinaV

schedule February 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was a short one. Poor Mickey. Sorry about the psycho email. Believe it or not, I sent you the short version. I was quite proud of myself having cut out as much as I did.
schedule February 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The Queen certainly has arrived at her Castle. The names that the house elves have for Hermione are brilliant. Rolling around laughing.
person anncee
schedule February 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hehehe i know i know! i loooooove that you update so much! i just love your writing and can't get enough of it =] another great chappie as always =]
person neelix
schedule February 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay... mutual rubbing of body parts is always good.... nicely done my dear! More, please!
schedule February 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Is Severus even aware of the packed products? I am assuming he must be, but if this was the family farm and he was not welcome there, he may not know. And the change of rooms should be accompanied by a few apologies, just for form's sake, even if spiced with a few denegrating terms of affection. LOL. short, but good!
schedule February 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love every part of this story but I'm sorry I do look forward to see what the elves will call her next.
person anncee
schedule February 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i'm desperate! please pleeeeeeeeeeease *on my knees* pleeeeease update more and faster!!! eeeee i can't wait anymore!! i must know if he finally lets himself out of azkaban!! and i want to know how they get along when he finally does get out and they um....consummate their marriage......>=]
schedule February 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ah haha! When is she going to learn that he knows everything? To be such a smart girl, she's a little slow on the uptake. Chalk it up to Gryffindor hard-headedness.
schedule February 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE Monty Python...in a fic I wrote over a year ago I had Lucius obsessed with watching television and fascinated with Holy Grail =) Brilliant comedy...sigh....Lovely chapter dearest, nice to see them moving closer.


Happy Writing!
S_G
schedule February 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
as so proud of myself when my mind immediately went to Monty Python before Hermione could reference it haha. i've seen Holy Grail and saw Spamalot last year as well which was fun, so immediately the song started playing in my head when i read that line.
and hmmm a contest you say? i used to be great with titles... probably not so much anymore. plus my name has already been used here. but you've got me thinking! great chapter, Sev was delicious in it, i pretty much had the same reaction as our heroine =]