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for The Gilded Cage

by ApollinaV

person MooMandy
schedule February 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Woo-hoo! Finally!!! That was pretty damn HOT!!! Can't wait for more, dearie! Killer K
schedule February 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YOWZA! Thought for a minute there my computer was going to melt! First though - Donald is a horse's ass, just thought I'd say. I hope he doesn't make a repeat appearance. One question that is bothering me -- I thought there couldn't be any penetration in Azkaban. The second go round sounded an awful lot like "regular" lemons. Can you clarify for me? Other than that the story continues apace. THANK YOU for putting those poor souls out of their misery. I just hope Hermione doesn't regret it in the morning. Though I suspect she might given your earlier characterization of her as a control freak who might be a little upset with herself when her brain kicks back into gear, that can be rough. I'm putting my money on rough waters ahead. Batten the hatches! Looking forward to the next installment!
person Anon
schedule February 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Woo-hoo, Houston, we have consummation! Worth the wait, my dear, as always. Nice, and believable, even. Please, let them not yell at each other in the morning? I hate the morning recriminations--maybe a shy conversation for a change?
schedule February 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Anon was me, got bumped again in the middle of my review, damn it.
schedule February 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hell, I need a ciggie and a drink! That was (here comes another new word for you) perfuckintastic! Thank you. While I wait for the next chapter, I will keep my fingers crossed that they don't freak too badly in the morning. lol Yeah, right! Applause, candies and flowers!
schedule February 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh holy crap I can finally review! My darling son spilled some sort of liquid on my keyboard and I just a new one. I never realized just how much I missed being able to type. lol Anyway, so I just wanted you to know that that was the only reason I haven't been reviewing your fabulously brilliant story! I simply adore this story, and I can't wait for more!!!
person Kimjo2
schedule February 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
so now i see why this is posted in aff!! between the two of them, something's going to blow (so to speak) and i wouldn't be surprised if it's the walls of azkaban! great update and i hope to provide all the needed rah-rah to keep you happily writing. yay, you! thanks so much
schedule February 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Dear god, that's hot.
person anncee
schedule February 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
AAAHHHH i can't take much more of it either!! i need some hot hermione and severus action, pronto! haha i'm a fiend, i know......anywhose i am sad that there may not be 3 weekly postings anymore =[ BUT i know that you will make it worth my while =] and i look forward to every aching bit!
schedule February 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this is definitely TMI, but the timing of this chapter could not be more perfect as i feel sooo sympathetic for Hermione right now. it's been a long time, and having just rejected a very tempting offer from a very tempting man, i'm definitely feeling it lol. frustrated to say the least. like i said, sharing too much, but the timing's just too weird lol