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February 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A permanent Hermione-shaped indentation, huh? I certainly fucking hope so! Poor, innocent-ish Billy. So why is Harry running away from Hermione? More please! ~M
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February 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh man. See I KNEW something was going to happen to ruin it. I had almost forgotten about the wards. But Hermione has a good point, perhaps this will help be part of the motivation Severus needs to prove his innocence and get out. I mean, I think Hermione's proven that she wants the whole marriage thing. She spends all her time with him, goes to him for comfort, she relies on him, etc. Anyway, fantastic update, I can't wait for more!! I'm just glad that that whole Hopper mess is over and done with so now she can focus on getting Severus out of prison and home with her.
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February 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ugh something is right freaky with my computer, this is my third time trying to leave a review!!! hope it works anyways, lovely chapter as always =] i can't wait til sev appeals and gets out! hehehe >=] i love how they're developing as a couple and that everything is working out so far =] yay more more more!
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February 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is an interesting story so far, especially since Severus is in prison. I'm surprised that Azkaban would allow Hermione to provide such luxuries...what's the point of being in prison, if they can be provided with luxuries? It's almost like house arrest, except he's confined to one small room. This has sort of bothered me because if it takes away from the punishment of prison.
The theology discussion that Severus and Hermione had was just wierd for me. There wasn't anything wrong per se, but I've never envisioned religion to any of the characters in HP, as it wasn't mentioned in the books (except for Merlin). But I'm open minded and you did forewarn me. LOL.
I noticed a spelling mistake; I don't remember which chapter it was, but it was the part where Hermione takes out the Blackberry to pencil Severus in. He was confused and didn't know what it the thing was and she explained that it was her schedule planner. It's written "crackberry" instead of "Blackberry"...
I hope the Douchbag gets what's coming to him. That's just horrible! But I'm sure Hermione can go to a place where it's her secondary office to answer emails and such? I'm glad Severus and Hermione are coming closer together. I hope Severus decides soon that he'd like to appeal. Anyways, it's a great story so far and please update again soon! =)
The theology discussion that Severus and Hermione had was just wierd for me. There wasn't anything wrong per se, but I've never envisioned religion to any of the characters in HP, as it wasn't mentioned in the books (except for Merlin). But I'm open minded and you did forewarn me. LOL.
I noticed a spelling mistake; I don't remember which chapter it was, but it was the part where Hermione takes out the Blackberry to pencil Severus in. He was confused and didn't know what it the thing was and she explained that it was her schedule planner. It's written "crackberry" instead of "Blackberry"...
I hope the Douchbag gets what's coming to him. That's just horrible! But I'm sure Hermione can go to a place where it's her secondary office to answer emails and such? I'm glad Severus and Hermione are coming closer together. I hope Severus decides soon that he'd like to appeal. Anyways, it's a great story so far and please update again soon! =)
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February 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
there are just such times when a good show tune is the best way to express the joy of the moment! loved the yummy lemony goodness. thank heaven they finally came together (literally). thanks so much you wonderful evil genius,you!
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February 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Apollina dear,
Back at a proper computer. Since I suspect many of the reviews have been the gushing type - oh, how dreadful, no pun intended - I will keep this short. *Excellent* work. As happy as I was to see the relationship progress at a natural level, I think it's safe to say that we were all getting antsy! Now all we have to do is move him out of Azkeban so they can have an actual shag.
Nice how you outed Hermione's marriage (and husband) - to ambitious git at a competitor! That's gonna bite her in the butt for sure. I can't wait to see how.
As Fat Tuesday approaches, I must scour the local bakeries for King Cakes. They don't fall out of the sky like in LA; you have to get out early and snatch them up, on The Day itself. I know, it does seem wrong, but there you have it.
Thank you ever so much for sharing your marvelous talent with the rest of us.
Cheers, and have a lovely weekend - CB
Back at a proper computer. Since I suspect many of the reviews have been the gushing type - oh, how dreadful, no pun intended - I will keep this short. *Excellent* work. As happy as I was to see the relationship progress at a natural level, I think it's safe to say that we were all getting antsy! Now all we have to do is move him out of Azkeban so they can have an actual shag.
Nice how you outed Hermione's marriage (and husband) - to ambitious git at a competitor! That's gonna bite her in the butt for sure. I can't wait to see how.
As Fat Tuesday approaches, I must scour the local bakeries for King Cakes. They don't fall out of the sky like in LA; you have to get out early and snatch them up, on The Day itself. I know, it does seem wrong, but there you have it.
Thank you ever so much for sharing your marvelous talent with the rest of us.
Cheers, and have a lovely weekend - CB
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February 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I was so happy to see this chapter up. I had mentioned this story to my daughter and she asked me if it was up already and what had happened. I have not told her yet. I know she should read it for herself, but she just cannot get into the Harry Potter fic. She is more a Twilight fan. Loved this chapter. Enjoy your weekend and I know we all look forward to Monday. I do hope that Hermione understood his reasons for not making her his favorite student.
Liz
Liz
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February 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm enjoying more.
Nothing else is needed.
Nothing else is needed.
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February 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, oh my... This was HOT! Could I trade places with Hermione? Please?!
By the way, I love the fact that Severus can feel how she is when she's home. I'd like to have something like that, too. It's not as if woman are the only ones hard to figure out, right? I somtimes wish for a detailed manual for men to. Around the lines of "How to descipher your boyfriend/husband" oh, and important, too, "How to make him understand you" ah, well, I guess the two of them need all the help they can get in their situation, right? Although - they are heading in the right direction now!!!
I absolutely adore your Severus. He's so right when he said that Hermione didn't need his encouragement. It's unfortunately rare that a teacher does have such reasoning. I wish there were more teachers who discover talent and knowledge in shy students. They are so often underappreciated... Although I can understand her hurt. She certainly felt rebuffed.
The chapter was really lovely. Lots of smut (yay) but still enough plot to see a developement in their relationship. In short, it was great to read!
By the way, I love the fact that Severus can feel how she is when she's home. I'd like to have something like that, too. It's not as if woman are the only ones hard to figure out, right? I somtimes wish for a detailed manual for men to. Around the lines of "How to descipher your boyfriend/husband" oh, and important, too, "How to make him understand you" ah, well, I guess the two of them need all the help they can get in their situation, right? Although - they are heading in the right direction now!!!
I absolutely adore your Severus. He's so right when he said that Hermione didn't need his encouragement. It's unfortunately rare that a teacher does have such reasoning. I wish there were more teachers who discover talent and knowledge in shy students. They are so often underappreciated... Although I can understand her hurt. She certainly felt rebuffed.
The chapter was really lovely. Lots of smut (yay) but still enough plot to see a developement in their relationship. In short, it was great to read!
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February 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm out of date, as always, but feel like addressing it. I can understand why counting. And why backwards. The question is: why in Polish? I'm curious because I have already spotted my native language mentioned a few times in fics. And would like to know if there was a reason why you chose it. Difficult? Barbaric? Kind of... exotic?
Although I would really like to hear SS trying to pronounce 'dziewięć' or 'sześć' :D
Great work (as always), can't wait to have a little time to read the rest :)
Belle
Although I would really like to hear SS trying to pronounce 'dziewięć' or 'sześć' :D
Great work (as always), can't wait to have a little time to read the rest :)
Belle