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for The Gilded Cage

by ApollinaV

person neelix
schedule February 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh... For some reason I found this chapter so poignant. I have shed a few tears, to be honest. I totally see where Severus is coming from. He would never settle at the Homestead if he didn't feel he had paid his due, and yet Hermione so obviously needs him.

And us poor readers need some lemons that penetrate our imaginations.....

Damn Severus and his moral high ground!
person MooMandy
schedule February 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ooo!!! Lovely, lovely chapter! So sweet! He'll be outta there soon! Hermione's too much to resist! Happy writing! Killer K
schedule February 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. I look forward to the next chapter.
schedule February 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
She is right, sex is a very powerful motivator. I can't wait to see what finally pushes him over the edge. lol Thanks! HG4eva
person neelix
schedule February 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh no.... Azkaban Droop! It probably has more effect on him than a bucket-load of Firewhisky, which means one thing. He has to leave! YAY!!!
person anncee
schedule February 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wheeeeeeee! a new chappy!! yipee! let's just make sure sev makes good on his vow then eh? >=]
schedule February 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I know prison is supposed to be bad but wow...but if ever there was incentive for a man, that would be it! I have to wonder if that's the last we'll see of Hopper though--the lawsuits are over but he's been humiliated so I'm guessing he's pretty ticked off now. Impatiently awaiting ;)
schedule February 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
AV,

You rock. I'm so loving this story. Is this your first? Just when I think it can't get any better, you prove me wrong. If righting the wrong isn't enough to get Severus out of prison, then proper sex is! LOL. Your chapter titles are hilarious. I have to know if you use an online translator and what is the name of the site.
schedule February 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Gods, I adore ffolkes! and Tattings--wizards play golf? LOL! What's with Harry being a git, anyway? The secrecy act should have prevented Hopper from entering his suit at all, shouldn't it? Just thought of that. And as for the wards, that's just flat out mean of them. I disapprove in the extreme! Bad Wizengamot, fifty points from--whomever. Good chapter!
schedule February 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
"Severus vowed then and there, one fist tightly clenching a pillow, his other fist gripping his bride