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for The Gilded Cage

by ApollinaV

schedule October 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM

Chapters 5-6: You set physical scenes so well
schedule October 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM

Chapters 1-2: I don
schedule October 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM

Chapters 3-4: Well, Hermione doesn
schedule September 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Horrah! *clap clap clap clap clap clap clap*

Congratulations on finishing, just wanted to thank you for such a great story, it was brilliant. You should be very proud of yourself indeed. I hope you have had a celebratory drink or two :)

I shall be eagerly watching for the next one!
person Robs
schedule September 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have indeed fallen off my chair again! And for the last time it seems. I can't believe it's all over! I have to say that was a fantastic ending to what has been a brilliant story to follow. The final chapter was just... perfect. The epilogue made me chuckle too! I don't really know how to compliment the story and do it justice. There are no words. Definitely one of the nest fics I have ever read, and I have read loads! Keep up the good work!
schedule September 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I would like to applaud you on a very well written piece of fanfiction. I have read your story through from its beginning, but I am apt to give comments very sparingly. Your story was phenomenally done and could easily hold its own against published authors. And I don't say that lightly, having read countless books and numerous authors. I found your story to be better put together and to have a more original plot that some of the published books I have read. You molded and shaped borrowed character through experiences and time and created new dimensions to them without losing their original personalities, which make them the characters we know and love. You did an incredible job and I hope you take pride in your finished product. I greatly look forward to reading your next work.
schedule September 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What a great story!!! I've enjoyed it so much and hope you will continue to write more in future.
person neelix
schedule September 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Totally fabulous ending - Severus and Domestic Bliss! Who'd have thought it? You certainly took me on the rollercoaster, I cried and laughed along with all the ups and downs, and cheered at the happy ending! Wonderful... !! Thank you!
schedule September 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YAYYYYYYYYY that was awesome.
person rini868
schedule September 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I've been waiting for this ever since Christev posted that she was finished beta-ing!

Aww! I liked that ending :)

I got a mention in the A/N. WooHoo!!!

Can't wait for Goat Cheese :D