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for The Gilded Cage

by ApollinaV

schedule February 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, the subject has been broached, at the very least. And she didn't get hexed, either. Now THAT's progress! Loving it.
schedule February 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! It's very well written and totally sexy. (Mmmmm, Snape, haha)
I just started the story, so this is basically a review of all the chapters put into one, since I didn't want to stop reading to post a review before I got the end. So let me tell you, I love the house-elves and their preoccupation with Disney, I find myself humming along with them when you mention songs. Also, you've portrayed both characters amazingly!

Just a little funny sidenote for you concerning Snape's "Happy Wednesday" gift. We have a silly custom originating from college marching band camp...every Wednesday is "Happy Wednesday" where you slap anyone you like on the ass (or grab it) and say, "happy Wednesday"! So, he could do that lol, just sayin'. We also had traditions for the other days too, but I've forgotten most of them, Wednesday's was the only one that we still do. =)
schedule February 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
guilt v.s. sex? Very interesting. I also like it. Does it mean I'm evil too? :D

As for my last question (I'm aware it's annoying but my curiosity is much greater:P) thanks for the answer but it wasn't what I was asking about. I know why he was counting in foreign language. I just wanted to know why it was Polish and not e.g. Lithuanian or Hungarian or Manchurian. Why your first (or maybe not first) thought was: let him speak... POLISH! Blame my eccentricity, but I ask this question everyone I caught mentioning that country :)

Thanks for your wonderful work; waiting for more,
Belle
schedule February 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. I look forward to reading more.
person wudelfin
schedule February 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
someone needs agood swift kick in the arse
person Kimjo2
schedule February 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
he's weakening as we speak! well done. thanks so much
person Kimjo2
schedule February 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
that was an absolutely brilliant strategy! serves that chinless wonder right. maybe she's right and sex will be the ultimate motivation. Loved the image of the "hermione shaped dent in their bed!" thanks so much
person mlui
schedule February 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I didn't know about the Crackberry... Great chapter! I hope Severus decides to appeal - I think it'd be better for both of them. I'm glad Hermione won! =)
schedule February 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love the slow build up of this story. I've read many that jump directly into the physical aspect of their relationship and then at the last minute hastily throw in their compatability outside of the bedroom. The anticipation was built up very well, not so stretched out to make the reader impatient but slow enough to give it a delicious sense of perfect timing. I can't wait to see how you work out Snape and Hermione's situation. Good job! I'm very impressed and I can't wait for you to update soon!
schedule February 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aww... poor Severus! Kudos to you for remembering that detail. I was worried that you had forgotten. lol... thanks, please update very very very soon!