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Yeah, Harry is a bit erm

Just reading pittwitch's review: "Snape - the Wizarding World's Fabio" lol!

And I agree with Voracious Reader. I'm glad Askaban is being looked into. The Warden should suffer, those poor children. I mean think about all the kids who weren't even at Hogwarts yet. They wouldn't have known much about house rivalries and Voldemort and killing people. They probably didn't even have wands yet and they were kissed because it was more economical this way! It really makes you angry >.<

AV, you are a superb writer with such lush detail and suspense. I love this story. I'll be sad when it ends. Any plans for your next project?

Hah, those stupid witches should know that he's only Hermiones dark wizard! (I guess I'd have to queue up if I wanted a little piece of him, too? *sigh* Okay, okay, I'll get my own man. *pout*)

Goodness, did anybody tell her that TALKING helps a lot to avoid misunderstandings? Well, I guess there is nothing like a tad of jealousy to keep a relationship spicy, but honestly. She shouldn't think that she's second choice! It's impressing how intelligent woman (witches) can be completely stupid and blind when it comes to Love!

Yeah, right... Penitent. LOL

Already waiting for the next update. Yeah, I know, next week. I'll be patient. Hm, more like I'll try to be patient... (At least at that pace I'll be able to review every chapter) ;-)

okay, just caught up from where I left off (moving sucks) and I'm so glad I did. While there are some cringe worthy scenes in here it's because I can so easily put myelf into the story you're crafting so I expect it's only the mortification the characters themselves are feeling -- Hallmark of a great story in my opinion. Please keep up the good work. Much Joy -- WL

Having outlined Warden Blotts, I do hope we see something nasty happen to him before the end. Looks like Percy is on his case though.

I shall attempt to wait patiently for the next chapter. *drums fingers on desk*

I have enjoyed the story thus far. Your fiction focuses on character development, which usually becomes boring if not done well. Kudos to you for sustaining the character development in an interesting manner that makes us care about what we will see Severus and Hermione experience next. I have to confess that your latest chapter disappointed me though. Gay Harry and Prick Harry are so trite and cliche in H/S fan fiction. I just find it disconcerting that a talented writer can't come up with a more creative way to deal with Harry than to relegate him to the 'I'm a perpetually adolescent homosexual' corner. Shame on you! I was going to rank you right next to bloodcult_of_freud on my list of favorite authors. I'm going to have to wait until the end of the story to give my final assessment. You are too good a writer to take the hackneyed path!

Fantastic as always!! sorry i've been mia, my grandma has been in the hospital but she's out and about and all better now. Thanks for the wonderful few chappies I got to read upon my return! eeeeeee I can't wait for the end even though I don't want it to =[ first things first, I want to see Hermione confront Sev about Lily Potter, bum bum bum....

No more cracking joints? Hooray, I want some, too! Will somebody, some where, PLEASE write a story where Lockhart escapes and randomly obliviates Skeeter into the Thickey Ward? I just can't stand that woman. But I love the idea of in inquiry into the warden's "behvioral modification' program. He should be an inmate. Then let's see how he likes being modified.

My goodness this is amazing! I've been reading it for days before and after work. I love it, every moment. I love how your building it up and how well you go into the characters' lives and emotions. It's just really beautiful and I can't wait to see what happens next. :) Just astounding.