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for The Gilded Cage

by ApollinaV

schedule May 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Interesting... interesting... I LIKE IT! Please continue!
person rini868
schedule May 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You put the review replies back at the start of the chapter? I
person rini868
schedule May 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh and by the way, I'm not really insulted about the Prophet being in Australia. Well not too much...
person Darkless
schedule May 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ah, new chappies!

Hmm...looks like a lot of 'damage control' is going on; Hermiony's company, her parents, her un-marriage, and probably various friendships that have taken a beating along the way. Whew! Poor girl is overwhelmed, hope she can manage whatever lies ahead.

Such lovely angst...yum!
person Robs
schedule May 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Could they get any further apart? Just as Severus decides to sort himself out, Hermione takes off to the other side of the world. Fan-bloody-tastic. All I can say is, she better sort herself out, because she is running out of friends to stay with. LOL at her parents...that charm obviously wasn't as good as she thought. *pouts* I want Severus! I reckon Hermione does want him back, but thinks he doesn't want her after what she did. Which, by rights, he probably shouldn't. But that little thing called love got in the way of that one. Look forward to the next chapter!
person neelix
schedule May 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
As always you keep me on the edge of my seat with each chapter. It's Friday night and I read this with an end-of-the-week glass of Rose. It's a cheap plonk, thank goodness, because most of it ended up down my front when I read this: Identification card photographers could have studied the photograph for creative inspiration.

Good grief woman! A simple line and I had apoplexy! Brilliant start to the weekend, I think. Thank you for another brilliant chapter. And just because I am such a fangirl, I hope Severus goes free....
schedule May 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A wonderful chapter. I look forward to the next one.
person katiekrm
schedule May 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I hope Hermione does go back and take her Newts and aces them. There is no way that Jake is not gay the way you wrote him! Why are you messing with my head? It's messy enough already. Poor Hermione. Getting kicked out of yet another home. Well, at least now with her parents' memories back she can forgo the judgmental Mrs. Weasley on holidays. I cannot wait for Severus to claim his woman! He'd better claim her well and good, too.
person anncee
schedule May 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
aww, good. i'm glad she finally decided to go and get her parents back. but ohhhh myyy woooorrrddddd that next chappie CANNOT i repeat CANNOT come fast enough!!! aahhhh what is he going to do as soon as he gets out?!?! AAAHHHH i can't wait!! i sure do hope it's an awful long chappie with severus and hermione meeting up at the end....i don't know if my heart can take it otherwise!
person CB13
schedule May 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sister - I'm still reading, albeit on the mobile, where it's hard to review regularly. Three cheers for you for realism...but not too much longer, right?

Really, really, wonderful story you have here!

Cheers

CB