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for The Gilded Cage

by ApollinaV

person anncee
schedule May 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh man they're literally in the same house right now!! why aren't they face to face?!?! eeeeee i hope that's in the next chappie! can't wait for their reunion!

ps i'm glad the pneumonia's gone! =]
person Anon
schedule May 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ok, i have waited longe enough for an update...where is it....please post more
schedule May 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Glad to know you are better, in case I didn't mention it before. Loved the chapter, especially the garden elf cheating!
person Robs
schedule May 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yet another fantastic chapter! Are you sure Jake is a hufflepuff? I'm thinking he is more slytherin than he really lets on. Severus has a lot of work to do to get her back, I think, even if she really wants him. This will have a happy ending, right? Look forward to the next chapter!
person geeklee
schedule May 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
so severus has a plan, huh? why do i get the feeling hermione is not going to go along with the plan? i am so enjoying the development of this story and the progression of the characters! as soon as i finish a chapter i want the next one! you always know where to stop to keep us hanging. makes me feel like an addict :)
schedule May 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ah... as always, you never fail to please me. Sex soon? Oh wow, I'm so excited! Very good!
person Olwen
schedule May 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Woot! He's out and on the prowl. I'm not sure he'd be so naive as to think she's really going to throw herself at him. All the open space must be going to his head.
schedule May 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The other day my fiance came home to me balling my eyes out in front of the computer... When I told him Snape & hermione had broken up he looked at me like i had just declared i'd found the last surviving crumple-horned snorkack!! Non AFF fans just don't understand...
person neelix
schedule May 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved the pace of this chapter. No dwadling in him pondering if he should search for Hermione or leave her be... Just straight in there. Loved it! Not sure I'd be as confident as he seems to be about an arms-open-wide reunion...but hey, he has to have hope!
person rini868
schedule May 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
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