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OMG, that was so romantic! Severus is such a stud. What a wonderful toast! Protect your woman! I love the part where he wants to nuzzle her neck just to hear Hermione laugh again. So sweet. I have to say that even though I have enjoyed many marriage law fics, I am always bothered when Hermione just gives into it and no one does anything about their basic freedoms being taken away! I mean the thought is always niggling in the back of my mind throughout marriage law fics and it takes some of the enjoyment away. In your fic, she finds a way around it, but I am so thankful for Severus' line about whoring their daughters. That is exactly what they're doing. Go Severus! I have thoroughly enjoyed your fic and am looking forward to more.

I loved this hopeful chapter. Severus is a hero, rescuing the damaged reputation of his wife. So happy to see you found a playmate for Jake. Happy ending for everyone in the wizarding world, eh?

once a week is absolutely brilliant for updates ... unless the reader is used to waiting only as long as it takes for a page to load in for the next chapter.

YAAAAY FINALLY. took the idiots long enough. humph. I sincerely hope they're not going to just 'talk'. fantastic chapter as usual.

YAY and aahhh man now I have to wait... I just read chapter 1-57 and have gotten less the 3 hour's sleep in the span of 4 days (my life got in the way so it took longer then it should have) so I'm really sorry if I'm not make much seance (or spelling errors but to tell you the truth that has little to do with my sleep deprivation^_^;)this has to be by far the best HG/SS fic I've read...thought I think I've only read a hand fuel but that's just because a lot of the once I open make me cringe and I tend not to be able to get past the first chapter no matter how interesting the plot sounds....and just so you know I put off reading my all time fav. Anita Blake series and the new Sims game because I was so sucked into this fic...one of the thing's I really liked about this fic is how much deeper the characters are then they are in the book themselves. I was really impurest by that fact by the who! there are other thing's i want to tell you but there running from me so I leave you another review when I catch them....*Sigh* at lest I got one important point in there sorry for all the rambling....

Yes baby steps are good for the both of them. Thank you for the chapter.
Liz

Ah, so she didn't really remember, but she worked it out. Smart girl. It amazes me how they can both still be so in love, but neither really wants to suck up their pride and just go to the other and proclaim their love. I really do love Jake. He'll turn Sev into an honorary hufflepuff any day now xD and what is this....Hermione, and Severus, in the same room? *gasp* and they're not going to kill each other? Excellent! She flies with her own wings indeed. Look forward to the next chapter!

Happy Days! Finally some full frontal.... can't wait!

Ah. As much as I love the angsty moments, I LIVE for the HG/SS moments. <3 It almost seems as if this wonderful tale is wrapping itself up. Do you have an idea of how many more chapters there are? Honestly, it made my day to see that you'd updated! Marvelous, marvelous, marvelous!!!!

This was a great chapter. I look forward to reading more.

Lol, the moment when Jake used jazz hands to set the scene for Severus made me laugh so much!