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by soldiersgirl0709

person maddie50
schedule December 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Either you posted more than one chapter (yea!) or I got behind on my reading. I loved the sensitivity both Hermione and Lucius employed in separating from their spouses.
schedule December 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG.

This was a like a rollercoaster! I actually liked Ron!

Narcissa is a twat, and she deserves to have something horrible yet funny happen to her. Knock that dog off her head.

I can't believe this is coming to an end! It's been such a wonderful journey!

Looking forward to more!

Vic x
person genna
schedule December 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
SG, I've never heard any marriage dissolution go like this: nice (the opposite of a fight breaking out) and neat (here are my divorce terms and conditions...I already have a new place to live).


I've noticed you've given us reasons why the marriages weren't working out. Why? If people can see that they are miserable with their spouse but also feel like they should remain married...why bother bringing someone else into the already crowded misery? I hear it said I was wrong BUT I had a really good reason.... Why not have a really good reason before a married person brings a single person/another married person into the lecherous mix? If the married person is rational enough to recognize a problem, why not carry the reason forward to not involving a new person?


Would they divorce if there was no one waiting for them on the other side? If not, how can the new spouse know they weren't the out and it could all happen again.
schedule December 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent as always
person tsorg
schedule December 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I can't believe how badly I felt for Ron. Her really loves her. I was pleased you had both Harry and Ron supportive of Hermione. That first and foremost their friendship was most important. I don't really give two shakes for Narcissa, she's so evil in her hate and sourness. I hope Draco supports his dad after the numbness wears away. Awesome job. Sitting on the edge of my seat for your next two chapters.
person Muffy
schedule December 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Clean and sort of simple (from the readers POV) good for them. I read Gilda's book, she was a hell of a woman - the quote works. Very brave of Ron, you made him so real, when I'm used to him being so one dimentional. Well done. Lucius...what a man. Thanks for the updates!
person kittycat30
schedule December 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I thought I would feel so happy having read this - but I do feel sad. I actually feel bad for Ron & Draco. It's hard to leave something so comfortable and known behind, even though you know it's the right thing for everyone. I know there will be a silver lining here somewhere :)
person Citten
schedule December 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i am really glad that you updated!!! i really loved the way it worked out. ron did really well much better than i thaught anyway, i still do feel slightly for him but..... okay its over. :) dear draco he will come around but narcissa she is just as i excepted she would be. i do feel bad about the mansion though--i really liked the idea of it, but C'est la vie. okay i do hope that the next chapters are coming soon and i still hate that it only has two chapters left. oh well maybe i can talk you into a sequel. ;)
person Debby
schedule December 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ron-centered fics O_o The horror!!!
I love this story btw^^ keep up the good work!
person Citten
schedule December 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
well that was beautifully sweet. :) so how are you going to work that out! i cant wait to see! :) i do hope that you get a break in your working so that you can update and soon!