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December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay!
I think this is one of your best stories ever. I loved reading it so much, well done. Just as always, I can't wait to read what you write next.
By the way, Lucius is just a machine - all those babies!
I think this is one of your best stories ever. I loved reading it so much, well done. Just as always, I can't wait to read what you write next.
By the way, Lucius is just a machine - all those babies!
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December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ah dose do you have to end it oh well love it
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December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't say that this was one of my favourite plot, in fact I would say that it is my least favourite of yours, however no matter the plot, characters etc, you can still make everything amazing!! I was not sold on the plot, but I read it because you wrote it. At the end, I was overall quite pleased with it. So I have to say that you are amazing!! I can't wait for more from you!!
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December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww. I love the ending. Glad he got to reconnected with Draco and that Ron got help and moved on. Can't wait for the next tale!
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December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awww, how sweet. that ending nearly brought tears to my eyes. you definately need a box of tissues for this story, so its a good thing i keep one near my computer lol. great job hun, as always, very much worth the read!
looking forward to your next story!
looking forward to your next story!
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December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Short but sweet... and hot! Lumione? Hhhmm, sounds like a famous couple that moved from the US to France :) Maybe I'm reading too many People mags :)
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December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story just felt real. Life isn't pretty - it's dirty, painful & hard at times. However, it's also beautiful & filled with happiness if you work for it. Really, this tale was a great read & ended with hope. I loved it!
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December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey there, this was a great story for what it is, but I didn't like it. It's seriously not my cup of tea. I didn't like it at all. The whole affair and thing acting like everything is all right and well with the world, argh!
I really feel sorry for Ron and oddly I feel sorry for Narcissa too.
Oh well, the second set of children were written very, very cute! :o)
I really feel sorry for Ron and oddly I feel sorry for Narcissa too.
Oh well, the second set of children were written very, very cute! :o)
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December 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
interesting ;)
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December 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent contrasts of the separation scenes; Hermione and Ron were far more connected than Lucius and Narcissa, so theirs was more emotional, Lucius' was more like a board meeting. Totally dictated by the family dynamics in both cases, and completely consistent with your characters. I do like the way he Lucius gives Narcissa the satisfaction of becoming the tragic heroine for her society friends, though. He knows her very well, aswell as having Draco administer her funds--now the kid can find out what his father's been dealing with!