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for The Affair

by soldiersgirl0709

person Lils
schedule February 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awww....this was an adorable read. ^_^ Thanks!!
person gwaelinn
schedule February 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful fic...even with the touchy subject. You did a wonderful job of showing the pain and consequence of such actions. I really loved the quote at the start of each chapter. They fit so perfectly. It is nice to read a Lucius fic where he is repentant and remorseful and...human. Your sex scenes were HOT! and the foreplay awesome! You are the first author who has inspired my to consider trying a HP fic for a change...
Thanks!
~Gwaelinn
person Mayr
schedule January 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I stayed up until 4am reading this fantastic story! I am such a Lucius fan and seeing a softer side of him was wonderful! I cried and felt all fuzzy towards the end chapters!
Good job!
person mlui
schedule January 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Lovely story...I'm not too big on affair stories, but this one turned out very nicely. I'm just sad that it took twelve years for Draco to come around. But I guess in the end, he /did/ come around and that's all that matters. Great job!
schedule January 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have reviewed your story on my blog "Loves Dramione" over at Blogger..

http://lovesdramione.blogspot.com

Let me know if you'd like me to remove the review :)

Good Work! Good story, and great execution, but I suppose it wasn't for me?

Much Love,

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person trizfores
schedule December 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
loved this story, like all your other sshg/lmhg stories :)

loved, loved, loved it!
person Muffy
schedule December 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved it. Thanks for writing it. This is a definite re-read. Bless and have a beautiful holiday season. *hugs*
person ROSEBUD
schedule December 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was a wonderful story, from a very talented author. I was never put off by the plot and I think it played out the way it was supposed to. I cried a box of tissues for two broken people desperately in need of comfort and companionship. Even though I knew they were wrong, and that innocents would be hurt, I was not surprised to see respect lead to friendship and then to love. I really loved the Epilogue--I'm such a sap.
person maddie50
schedule December 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I thought you did a wonderful job with difficult subject matters; infidelity, death of a child, alcoholism, depression, spousal mental abuse, and what could be described as Post Traumatic Stress Syndrome on the part of Lucius perhaps. The reactions of the characters and the way their friendships develop and grow as well as those that grow apart seem to be described from an experienced point of view. I have lived through some of these life experiences and I think your tale is very well done.
person Germania
schedule December 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it. Second best after "something in the way she moves". Thank you for sharing it with us.