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@ chapter four.

Awwwwwww.

I wanted to drop a line about this chapter because I thought it was very well done, but I can't wait to get to chapter five, so it will be a very short line.

Loved it. Excellent.

love.
luci.

Screw the subject matter, I am enjoying this immensely. The story is very emotive; I can actually feel the alienation and misery. And yet, you've still managed to make Lucius as sexy as hell ;)

Excellent job!

@ chapter five.

Sorry for sending the last review multiple times.
My interwebs started acting up and I hit the review button about a bazillion times to try to get it to submit.

Interesting start... I can't wait to see the rest of it.

Just beautiful. I have always envied the way you evoke your character's emotions, and not just in the erotic scenes. You give them depth, which makes them far better than my own poor attempts. More, please, whenever you are ready!

You're back! And this story so far is fab. I can't wait to read more. Keep up the wonderful work.

i love this. another great fic.

hmmm... I am very interested so far. I can't wait to see where you are going with this.

Once again you have begun a tale that has captured my interest. You always choose your words with such care. You can feel the pain and loss rolling off Lucius and Hermione and see the budding friendship developing. I know the subject material might bother many, but it seems that both marriages have stopped being partnerships. Four people going through the motions of living they have stopped seeing each other and only see themselves and their hurt. Hermione taking this job has opened her eyes and Lucius accepting her help has pulled him out of his own misery. I can't wait to see where this journey takes me as a reader I have my tissues at the ready!