rate_review Reviews

I like how you're writing this story and it's seems real to me almost espeaciley the first chapter. So i do know how it's feel to lose a child and having everyone tip toe around you. The only difference is that i had a husband and we each help the other to get through. Sorry about that sad tip but other then that the story seems good so far cant wait for more.

Heartbreaking and definitely tissue-consuming but as always great quality writing! Sometimes a great tragedy makes a relationship stronger, sometimes it damages beyond repair and it is better to part ways before both hurt each other so badly that it becomes truly unbearable.

You are doing a great job of portraying their situations and evolving emotions.

Oh, this is one of the most honest stories I have ever read! I love it!

Don't worry about people thinking that you're promoting affairs. I cannot see that in this story at all. It's the sad story about couples drifting apart - something that happens quiet often sadly. And in this case it's even more understandable. I don't even want to imagine how horrible it must feel to experience the death of a child. It's the hardest thing that can happen to a parent.

Okay, we already know where this will lead, but I am still very curious about the twists and turns it will take! I think that you did a good job with your story and that you're describing the situation they are all in in a very sensible way. I can feel for Ron, too, even if he's (unintentionally) hurting Hermione. It was his baby, too...

I don't have as much sympathy for Narcissa, though. Bitch that one! ;-)

Oh my goodness, I LOVE THIS STORY!!! You had me from hello. I cried twice already. I'm pregnant with twins so it really hit me hard, especially when I read your author's notes. I just wish the chapters were longer so I have more to absorb, but they look like they're growing in size as the story goes on so I can't wait. Some fluff soon? Pwetty pwease?

Excellent!

Narcissa is quite the bitch isn't she. I love that Lucius is finally getting the upperhand in that situation, and I call it a situation because it stopped being a relationship ages ago. What exactly was causing Hermiones reaction to Ron? Was it the drinking or his earlier behavior. I would assume that if you were trying right your life these things would be welcome but, I was always the type move on and distance myself right away so I don't know from whence I speak. As to your comments on the review board you are unbelievably amazing. To have all those things happen to you in your life and your not angry or bitter and still have a wicked sense of humor is nothing short of a miracle. I'm glad your little one was better than you expected and a blood disorder isn't great but, it is better than the alternative. I myself am waiting for the results of the MRI and hoping it is not cancer so please keep your fingers crossed. Can't wait for more stories and Well done!!!!!

LMAO Go Lucius! You reject Frosty the Snow Bitch!!!!

And poor 'Mione...Having Ron on her like that...*tuts* I feel sorry for him but he makes me sick.

Two great chapters again my love I enjoyed them immensely!

Much love!

Vic x

I love this story so far!!!! I am just wondering who will make the first move..... My money is on Mr. Yummy Yummy Malfoy...... I am just biting my nails waiting for the next chapter.... Hopefully by the time you update they won't be too bloody!!!

You were right . I deffinatly need tissues, you got me going around paragraph 5. By the way for all the non-canon stories that I love you nailed Rons response to this particular situation. Can't wait for the rest! Well done.

Their home became a tomb as silent as the grave in which their son slept.


This breaks my heart S_G really, I cried when I read this for the first time, and it's just as hard now it's up.

On to chapter 2!