rate_review Reviews

So, I've been in bed sick all weekend and I just finished reading ALL of the stories you have posted. I kid you not. You're are simply amazing and I think this story might be my favorite yet. Keep up the amazing work, I'm looking forward to reading more!

To be honest, everybody NOT getting that this is not about cheating must not be reading the same story I am reading!

Your characterisation of each and every person in the story (even Ron and Narcissa, being secondary characters) is great. They are so human in their suffering and their wish for company and warmth. I appreciate very much the fact that you don't point the finger. Neither at Lucius and Hermione for having an "improper" relationship (building), nor at Ron or Narcissa for trying to deal what happened in their relationships in their own way.

Many people forget that there are always two people in a relationship and that it is seldom possible to lay the blame on one person only when it doesn't work out. It's hard to accept, but my experience with couples splitting up usually each partner had at least a little part in the situation leading to the break up. What's even worse are relationships where nobody did anything wrong, and both tried very hard... That often ends with more hurt than other relationships, because neither wants to see when it just doesn't work anymore.

Anyways... Lovely story, it makes my heart ache for both of them. By the way... Is it Hermione or Narcissa (walking in on them) saying the last sentence? Well, I guess I will know when the next chapter is up! Thanks for sharing this story with us!

You know, it would be a nice twist if Draco were the one to arrange for the separation of his parents so they could both get a better life than the one they currently have. Give her a settlement and an old estate and turn her loose--free range frozen turkey! Aren't most Slytherins known for their realistic attitude?

You are driving me crazy with the yearning these two have for each other. I fear that Lucius not be able to keep this much of a secret once anyone looks at him with Hermione it will be blatently what his intentions are. I like the depth you gave Draco in this chapter. He seems to want what is best for his parents but has no idea about what has been going on and for how long. Maybe Lucius has a bigger ally in Draco thatn he thinks. The torture you put me through while I wait is so worth the chapters you put up. I can't wait to see if Ron really has a mistress and what force will bring an end to the platonic part of their relationship. Well done!!!!

WOnderful fic, I can hardly wait for more.

Somebody should smack Draco on the head, but then, I think he was a bit upset about being used as his mother's personal owl. So, he wants his father to be happy, huh? Dark times are approaching for Narcissa, and I find myself not caring at all.

Nasty Draco! Come to Liverpool at one, Mistress Vicky is waiting with her whip, your pale behind needs a good spanking. You will pay for your insolence, while bent over Mistress's knee. LMAO

Ok, so Draco is a twat but still....I love him.

Urgh, Frosty the snow bitch has a cheek, a mistress? My Lucius would never be that crass. Crazy bitch. Maybe if she wasn't a frigid snob with a stick up her arse, she'd see the man she has before her.

Poor 'Mione, I will rip his burning bushed freckled pecker off if he is doing the dirty. I hate him.

I loved the kiss, god it gives me chills to read this story.

I love it!

Much love,

Vic x

OMGZ you wrote such a beautiful fanfiction! I love it! Especially the way you portraited Lucius and Hermione., as broken people, I like your Lucius,. he's so human, and still Slytherin! Wonderful job and update soon!

Hi, still really enjoying the depth you have put into the storyline. You're Lucius is so compled, yet,
open like I have never read before.

I loved the way he openly explained his relationship with Narcissa. The kiss right after, was acknowledging that he knew he was beginning to feel deep for Hermione.

I also think, that although she is trying to fight their attraction, part of her just wants to give in and be loved. I feel so sorry for her.

You have to feel for Draco, fancy his mother going into detail like that to a grown up son. I seriously think that Narcissa is in need of treatment. After all she is blaming anyone but herself.

Beautifully written, looking forward to more. Best wishes, Donavon