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by soldiersgirl0709

person Voracious reader
schedule November 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapters! And well worth the wait. Don't know if you are American, but Happy Thanksgiving; coming home to find this made dinner with the relatives worth it. I love Lucius when he's all hot and sweaty. Draco can be as immature as he likes, but I hope he's not going to do something dumb and hurt her, is he? Although Narcissa might be allowed to have a go even if it would be mostly from wounded pride.
person Linneh
schedule November 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Incredible! :) I hope Hermione is going to find out what Ron's doing all the time. I'm really curious! Good job!
schedule November 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved the smut xxxxx

I was crying when Hermione started to feel guilty....poor Mione

I think maybe she should confront Ron or tell Ron the truth and divorce him xxx

Beautiful ch 14 and 15
person Muffy
schedule November 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant. Clever of Lucius to mark Hermione. It was interesting reading their reactions. I can only guess (and probably wrongly) as to what Dear Ron is up to. Personally I think he's gay (but then again, I'm pretty sure my husband is gay too and no one else believes me....tmi, I know).

Thank you and happy thanks giving to you, too. Mine was in October - Canadian here :)
schedule November 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
such a wonderful story! i cannot wait to read more of it.
schedule November 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
can't wait to seen what is up with ron. I like how draco was compassionent towards lucius at the end of the chapter. he is not such a jerk after all, I bet he was just surprised seeing granger talking to his father so informally.
person Darkephoenix
schedule November 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You have my deepest and most sincere sympathies, sinus infections are never fun. You play out the struggle in Hermione's mind very well. Excellent read.
schedule November 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! When are we going to find out what Ron has been up to?
person KellyJCR
schedule November 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Woof! That was just hot! I was surprised that the Weaslys didn't question the actions of Ron and Hermione. Is it because thay have always been this way since the baby or has the family just decided to let them work things out on their own. I can actually see how despratly Lucius wants Hermione. I actually felt pain when he was pleading with her to acknowledge that she too thought of him when they were apart. I am not a very soft or emtional person ( my mom actually asked me if I felt any once.) but this story is making me ache in a way that a story never has. Its a little disconcerning in a good way I think. Hope you have a good holiday. Well done!!!
schedule November 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
its a good job it's freezing cold down here, need to go outside and cool off!! Fantastic loving it