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by soldiersgirl0709

schedule November 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Heart felt and wonderful...great job in making it believable!
schedule November 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the Thanksgiving present - another set of great chapters!
person doodle
schedule November 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Your writing is how I wish I could write. I did not want to read this. Good friends with slim ball cheating husbands made me leary. I am glad I clicked and read. Your note to a reviewer about the war changing people hit so close to home. My neighbor is back from his tour but the man I knew is gone.
schedule November 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I always love your stories, this one is especially fantastic, the taboo adds an extra edge. I am looking forward to finding out what Ronniekins has been up to.
Different note, as much as I love what you can do with the naughty Slytherins, I can't wait to read the new Remus story you've mentioned. Happy Thanksgiving! I am thankful for these hot, hot chapters to start my day!!
schedule November 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH! I am becoming so wrapped up in this. The heartbreak and longing they are feeling; I have never cried like this over a fanfic. Hubby keeps wondering why his handkerchiefs are disappearing from his drawer. I could never understand or condone cheating before, having had an ex who was fond of the pastime; but this is so different. This isn
person Letum
schedule November 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Alright, I figure it's about time I stopped lurking and finally tell you how amazing your story is. I think that the topics covered in it hit close to home for many people, myself included. You write beautifully and I cannot wait to see where this goes. :) Please post again soon!
person SM
schedule November 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I've read several of your stories, but I don't think I've enjoyed them as much as this one...and the others have been great! You really capture the depth of the emotions of these two main characters, and I've liked the slow progression out of their loneliness to each other. I especially like that you give them consciences and don't have them fall into bed and live "happily ever after" as in many other stories. You're a very talented writer!
schedule November 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lovely smut, you do make my imagination go wild. Unfortunately there will always be guilt, its the way we woman are made I'm sure, most men I've come across don't seem to suffer with their conscience quite as much as us.
Keep up the good work, can't wait for more.
schedule November 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Selfishly, I was more than ready for your tasty hot lemonade. It was was needy, and explosive and so good. But at what cost? The magic of the heart in her palm was inspired. I love the way you use it to communicate their emotions. Right now the feelings they are receiving are of caring and love, but will it also be an indicator of the other's pain and/or anger? So, I'm ready for the next chapter now. I think the mine field has just been triggered hasn't it.
schedule November 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I guess that's the best thing to do. It's sad that so many people forget that they were once deeply in Love, and even if that's not the case anymore, there usually have been good reasons!

They finally did it! It was unavoidable, just as it was unavoidable that Hermione would feel bad about cheating afterwards. I think Lucius is further down the road, than Hermione is. After all Narcissa has been distancing herself from him for a longer time and for a lesser reason than Ron. I guess that makes it easier not to feel guilty about what happened.

And although I understand why Hermione feels guilty, she shouldn't... At least not if Ron's really cheating at her. There is no reason to be true to somebody who doesn't honour her in the same way!

Lovely update... I LOVE lemons...