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by soldiersgirl0709

person smmz79
schedule November 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow so they have opened up themselves to each other.. i like lucius in this very much... love the chap!!!
person smmz79
schedule November 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow she they have become friends i think that she is burrowing her way into his heart.. by caring about the things that he loves... but she has no idea what she is doing and the impact that this will have on her...
person smmz79
schedule November 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh wow what a powerful chap... you definitely gave us a deeper glimpse into hermione and rons relationship...
person smmz79
schedule November 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh so lucius and hermione are both humming it seems that their hearts are starting to feel a little lighter..... ok so this chap was partially in narcissas perspective and it was interesting to see how she feels about her relationship with lucius and what she feels is her role...
schedule November 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 11: Sad events. It doesn
schedule November 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 12: Whew! Almost caught in the act
person Letum
schedule November 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oooooh, it burns me up that Hermione lets Ron treat her like that. Lucius should steal her away and show her how a real man treats a woman. :P
person Muffy
schedule November 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I knew he couldn't stay away. :) Lovely gift, thoughtful... *sighs* What is going on with Ron and why is Harry not supporting both his friends? I'm not expecting an answer, just typing out loud. Thanks for the update!
person KellyJCR
schedule November 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was close. Lucis must always have his way. That was the second time he held on to Hermione when he knew they could be found out. I wonder if he intends to "accidentally" let Ron know whats going on. In any case I love the watch you had him give her. I have never heard of a gift that romantic in any story before. You do have the best imagination. Love that you have a Remus story finished he doesn't get enough stories and is usually overlooked. Looking forward to more. Well done!!!
person lala
schedule November 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
personally, the one factor i don't understand in this fic [or most other ron has an affair fics] is why harry doesn't tell her or why Hermione doesn't realize how wrong it is that he didn't tell her. being a friend IS about loyalty to both parties, but that loyalty only extends so far where you tell the guy 'hey, either you tell her or i will, you have a week' but he doesn't do that, he just sits there and makes faces.

what a terrible friend, Hermione truly deserves better from both and i hope she finally realizes that... at least to knock some sense into harry over the true meaning of friendship and that it means more than just loyalty to the weasleys.