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by soldiersgirl0709

person smmz79
schedule November 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh my that was a great chap... hermione has given him the forgiveness that his should have given him... they are definitely opening up to each other and he was watching her from his office how sweet is he... i like the way he explains his change in personality and out look on life
person smmz79
schedule November 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
nice chap wow lucius was really there for her when she needed someone to be.... great chap i really liked this one and it said sooo much
person smmz79
schedule November 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh wow what a chap..... so ron is burying his grief and thus driving a larger wedge between him and hermione and now hermione and lucius are admitting to their feelings... great chap!!!!
person smmz79
schedule November 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow what a hot steamy kiss you can feel the need for each other just radiating threw the chap!!! hmm i am not sure whether to think that ron is having an affair or he is just drowning his sorrows???
person smmz79
schedule November 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wooo what a chap.... so draco starts off kind of rough but that is to be expected, so i wonder if draco will be able to move past his opinions of hermione when he finds out that she is who makes him happy... and i just thought of something what is lucius going to do with that property he bought in dover??? maybe it would make a nice home for him and hermione or maybe a home for just hermione???
person Voracious reader
schedule November 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved the watch and its little embellishments, what a perfect gift for him to give her. I'm also impressed at how perfectly you've assimilated the possibilities in a magic society and use them to create your subtext, but then I've always found your stories true to their internal logic. You always write the best Lumione's! Happy Holidays!
schedule November 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was a lovely chapter with lucius remembering to get her a gift. Tipical ron, what a jerk. I am still wondering where he is going.

can't wait for more.
person smmz79
schedule November 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ok so i am joining you on this journey.... you are becoming one of my favorites i do love your stories!!! ok this first chap was tough but wow did it really express the different reactions to losing a child... great job....
person smmz79
schedule November 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh my what a great second chap as well... we got a glimpse of lucius' life... how sad.... i just love him and he seems sooo defeated
person smmz79
schedule November 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yeahhh they are working together you can already see the connection between them it is small but it is there none the less... i think that they will come together because they are both lacking in the human contact department and that although they have made themselves seperated from those feelings they still need someone else to connect with