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way to go hermione finally doing something for your self... well this is not going to be good when it comes out in the open i just hope hermione and lucius can stick together and strengthen each other... i am sure they will be having some pretty interesting lunches it will be hard for them to be sooo close to each other but still have to put on an act if others happen to be around... ohhh and that day together that lucius was talking about sounds soooo yummy!! great job i can not wait for your update.. oh and i totally loved your one shot to lady blue eyes' challenge very cute

I certainly don't condone cheating - but, I can't blame them. It's so sad that we feel like we have to put on a show and fit ourselves into a definition of normal. They're not being selfish, they're being human! Of course, I love Lucius and Hermione together, so it's not like I'd complain about them cheating anyway :)

I really get that love but not exactly in love. *sighs* I enjoy the intensity, it leaps off the screen, and I do hope Hermione is wrong and that things don't end badly. Thanks.

I love this story :D

I just wanted to also tell you about how realistic you make your stories, which is also what caught my eye to all your awesome fics. I love how you make Hermione a real person, not some drop dead gorgeous girl who sounds so fake, but someone that I can see in my head as a real person.

Because of your amazing stories, I've gotten picky and cant read many others now So i just wanted to compliment you on that

Keep writing
~Rae

That was hot and emotional all at the same time, it brought tears to my eyes. I am such a sap. Can't wait for more, let the games begin.

It's strange that you say you don't focus on it when it's so much a part of the stories, much as electricity is part of any story set in modern times. It's simply there, like turning on the lights. That's what I ment when I said you had assimilated it so well, as if you actually used it yourself.

This was beautifully done. I am enjoying this more and more and I love that your leading ladies are so honest and real. Don't concern yourself with loving the grade A jerks. I tend toward them in just about any movie, story, whatever just because they are vastly more interesting than the (usually) angst laden hero. Excellent work.

woo hoo and there it is the answer to all of that delicious sexual tension.... hmmm oh but he is sooo tempting!!!! great job

Sorry I haven't reviewed lately, just recently had time to read and review all the fics I'm reading!
But I have been reading all that you have posted and It's very emmotional what they are both going trought! Finding something between them that makes it worth living again. Not to mention hot too! So it's on now, but as she says It can't end well!

And yes, like anyone could have said no to him.! I agree totally with you, Michael Caffee and Lucius make me squee aswell but Include Col. Tavington into that mix and you can really make me squee.. (And there you really have a jerk)
Don't wonder about yourself, I'm right there with you, I do so too. But you can't help it with his characters *g*

i am loving this story!
i'm a sucker for lucius being nasty and naughty... but the sweet side of lucius is awesome too, and you write it so well!
it's easy to believe... i love the depth you add to the characters in each of your stories. even though each story is different, the characters stay in character, but you add another layer that is totally believable and relate-able (if that's a word...lol)
oh! i have been inspired by your stories to draw a picture of lucius and hermione... and i wanted to share it with you... http://ickyintimidation.deviantart.com/art/love-thy-enemy-105003941
i hope you like it, and i can't wait for the next chapter!