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by soldiersgirl0709

person Anon
schedule December 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person maddie50
schedule December 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Impressive detail from both Hermione's and Lucius's perspective. I am assuming you are female (if not, sorry--no problem here). I guess I could take a peek at your profile, but I have not done so yet. Anyway, I have noticed the description of a male's orgasm can be lacking in many stories. That is not the case here. Vivid imagery abounds. Oh yeah!
schedule December 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I would willingly give way to Lucius. Problem is I have my own Slytherin,
who was famous around Shrewsbury, and I have to conclude that he would not put up with me having
a one nighter with Lucius. Therefore for my life, and Lucius's would be in danger (Ron was a commando marine)I will use my imagination, or pwp on fanfic.

Hope you are all o.k. Best wishes for Christmas. Donavon aka Eileen, from Shropshire, England.

Have a good Christmas for you and yours.

Donavon.
schedule December 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I read your review reponse at the end of the chapter. I can see why you where drawned to write this story, its almost in a way for you to express your feelings for your cousin,(did I get that right.) and her baby. I really am enjoying this. Can't wait to see more clues as to where mr weasley is at all this time. Until next time.

I wish I was her with lucius. I like their interaction together.
person KellyJCR
schedule December 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I knew she wouldn't be able to stay away (what women in her right mind would.). I am dying to find out what Ron has been up to. I do find it odd that she seems so isolated not just from Ron but from everyone in gerneral. After a year you would think that someone she was close with would try and reach out to her. Am I missing something? Lucius obviously gets his way I wonder how long he will be willing to keep it all a secret. I have a feeling that this "affair" will be a turning stone in their relationships with their spouses. Lucius will deffinatly want to leave Narcissa but, Hermione will have to rationalize her way through a breakup with Ron. I don't see that being a calm voyage. Looking forward to more. Well done!!!
schedule December 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just read chpt.16, Ron is such a jerk. grrr. Can she just whack him, divorce him and get it over with???
schedule December 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay chpt. 17,

person carha
schedule December 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! thats the word that fits this chapter the best. Wow! Very intense chapter hun. I am glad that Hermione finally gave up. As always, you leave me begging for more more more!
person smmz79
schedule December 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
well i figured that it was only time for hermione to allow everything to sink in... but i am glad that lucius is making her face her feelings... so she can not run away and hide them.. so she is going to take some time to i give it a week before lucius pays her a visit and i can just imagine him following her and not allowing her to forget about him and what they feel with each other... yummy what a hot thought lucius coming to whisk her away.... she can only fight this for so long
person smmz79
schedule December 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
woo hoo i guessed right one week... how sweet 'my soul's salvation' now isn't that just the sweetest... i doubt she will be able to run from her feelings now... hmm i wonder what ron is up to i am sure he is cheating on her but still??