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Another awesome chapter! While I don't agree with affairs, you have written a story where my heart goes out to Hermione and Lucius. I just hope that you eventually write that Hermione realizes that she is hurting Ron more by living the charade instead of asking for divorce.

As for your health, I completely understand. My five children, mother-in-law and myself all got it this past week while we were staying in a hotel. One child would get it, then another, then back to the first child, etc. Now that we are back home, we are starting to get over it, but now my husband (back at the hotel for work) has it!

I look forward to the next update of this wonderful story!

hmm so draco is observant... of course lucius and hermione are lost in their own little world... so he does not think that luccius will fall in love with her well i think that they are definitely heading that way.... great chap... i like that hermione can make him squirm

a very romantic chap but a very sad one as well.... poor lucius and hermione they are forced to live half a life bc they can not fully admit their love for each other... great chap... can not wait to read more... i hope you get feeling better.... :-)

Okay, I just caught up with your story.... I'm delighted that they are finding joy with one another but the little voice in my head is saying, "where is this going to go, it can't end well.... sigh." What the heck is Ron doing with the majority of his day and why doesn't Hermione seem too interested in finding out? She loves him but doesn't know if she's in love with him.... does Ron still love her? Draco loves his dad, that's obvious, he was looking for that spark to come back into his father but thinks it's just sex and nothing more between them and Narcissa isn't so dense that she can't sense she's somehow losing her husband, does she care if she loses him? I know she doesn't want the money train to disappear.

I'm totally hooked to your story and romantic that I am, I want a happy ending... I don't do the bad/sad endings anymore since my son was diagnosed with cancer. Maybe that's why I initially found this site, something to lose myself in. You are as always writing an excellent story, I look forward to your next update!

Awww that chapter almost made me cry because of the sweetness!!! I hope you and your children get better! The stomach flu has hit here HARD as well. I found this article in between reading the two chapters and I thought you would enjoy reading it as well...it made me laugh and love Jason Isaacs even more. http://purpleglitter.livejournal.com/tag/wig

I think you communicated the all consuming passion of their experience brilliantly.

What possible excuse could Ron have for being gone for three days? I imagine Harry is feeling the pull of being man in the middle of his two friends, although it appears he is being loyal to Ron and possibly lying for him. I can understand the level of Hermione's guilt on a moral level. However, in the state her marriage is in it seems she is over-reacting. Perhaps it is just the fact she sees the "death" of her marriage with the consummation of her tryst with Lucius.

A very clever gift idea. P.S. Ron's a dick head.

I am relieved that Hermione has reconciled with her feelings. I do believe she and Ron should confront the disaster that is their marriage, but at least this way each of them are leading separate lives and apparently receiving the attention they need from someone else. I have seen this before and heard of this happening when a child dies. The effect upon the couple is devastating and can be insurmountable for some. Your author's note relates such tragedy. My heart goes out to them.

I love this story. Please email me with updates. ShadowFlamePanther@tampabay.rr.com