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for The Affair

by soldiersgirl0709

person carha
schedule December 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry you aren't feeling good hun. The stomach bug is going around here too, and I already got it. Thankfully mine only lasted 3 days. The one here has a short span. Hope you feel better soon hun, and as always, loved it!
schedule December 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So sorry to hear you aren't feeling well. We have a bunch of bugs floating around in our little world too. Nice chapter, but it seems Hermione has created a stalemate. We all know that can't last long. Get well soon.
schedule December 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i hope you feel better, and this is my favorite chapter so far. thank yoiu for posting it while sick bye
person Steph
schedule December 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another great 2 chapters - but did anyone else see them in Diagon Alley?? Im looking forward to Harry's inut in the whole messy Hermione/Ron situation. Poor you with the stomach flu - hope you all feel better soon!
person kittycat30
schedule December 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was sweet and sad... loved the "alone time", but the reality check makes it bittersweet. I hope you're all feeling better. It's going around & nothing is more disgusting than cleaning up after sick kids when you're sick too! Good Luck!
schedule December 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm so caught up in this story! Really dear heart, I think without a doubt, hands down your best Lucius story to date.

I can't help but love it, Making Love Out Of Nothing At All is playing in my head everytime I read this.

Looking forward to more!

Love,

Dr. Daddy

xoxoxo
person Voracious reader
schedule December 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
While I realize that Draco loves his mother, could you please let him find out that she isn't as in need of his protection as he believes? Perhaps she can decide to allow him an amicable divorce with a large settlement, just to get her out of the way? But I do admit I like the way you've kept Draco in character.
person KellyJCR
schedule December 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Weather he wants to or not Lucius will be the one to give them away. He is so taken with her he doesn't realise that it shows in his every look,touch and word he gives. I fear that if Narcissa is ever in the same room as the two of them that the jig will be up. I never thought Hermione would be better at sheilding her emotions than Lucius, funny how things work out. You are killing me with the secrecy surrounding Ron and his disappearances. I guess we will have to wait it out. Looking forward to more and loving every minute of the story. Well done!!!
person KellyJCR
schedule December 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is brutal. Its killing me and I'm not involved in the relationship. I want so badly for them to have what Lucius proposed. That just the thing though isn't it. To have it all would mean they would have to sacrafice it all. It really puts a price of need on your desires. How bad do you want what you desire, what is the cost, and is it really worth it all in the end. Lucius has already has his answer however Hermione in her rightiousness will fight this tooth and nail. Will she come around? Only you as our knowledgable author has the answer and we must be patient as the facts unfold. I hope the plague that has descended on your house passes soon. The stomach flu is the most vile of illnesses and I hate it when the kids pass it around our house like a party favor. Can't wiat for more. Well done!!!!
person ZukoRocks30
schedule December 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So sorry to hear you're not feeling well. :-( Stomach flu--yikes! God's blessings on you for a quick recovery.
"The Affair" is...wow! You certainly have written it in a way that makes it seem very plausible for Lucius and Hermione to find comfort and more in each other's arms. Ron needs to get a grip. I wonder why his family had not helped him to get passed his grief? Narcissa--now she's a piece of work! If I were married to Lucius, I sure wouldn't want to just "service" him once a month for "his needs"!
It's obvious that Lucius and Hermione love each other. You really have me curious how this will work out for the two of them...if it can! I sense a little "Romeo and Juliet"-ness to the story, that this was doomed from the start.
Anyway, keep up the good work! :-) I am always anxious everyday for a possible new chapter!