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by soldiersgirl0709

schedule December 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hehe. You wouldn't happen to want to make it three chapters for the X-mas season, would you? 'Cuz we would like it. *hint hint* *wink wink*
schedule December 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another great update! Thanks! I hope the Christmas spirit moves you to update again very soon - because that was quite a cliffhanger you left us with! :) How many chapters will this one be? Thanks!
schedule December 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
why??? why did you do that to me? how could you leave it there? lol...jk
this story is soooo great... and i was actually feeling nervous for hermione and lucius in those last paragraphs.
can't wait for an update! i have to know how they get out of this one... or if they do. lol
oh... and i'm glad you liked the picture i drew... you really have inspired me to draw more lucius and hermione pics... and if you'd like, i'll let you know when they're uploaded.
you are so awesome. i've said it before, and i'll say it again... your lucius stories are the best that i've read on the internet... and i've read a couple a few times, because they are so good.
anyway... can't wait for the next chapter! :hug:
schedule December 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god.

Are they caught?

I hope so...I want it all out in the open...I love this story!!

Looking forward to more!

Love,

Vic xx
person KellyJCR
schedule December 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have to back up a little I was away and just got around to reading. I am upset that Ron is not having an affair. I feel horrible that he has been silently suffering the entire time. I am not condoning that two wrongs make a right its just I feel so awful for Ron. He was doing what he thought was for the best. Hermione just moved on beacuse she was willing to accept their sons death and Ron tried to pretend it never happened. I don't know how to feel about the whole situation it just plain sucks. I love the turns your story is taking and the cliffie you just left us with is killing me. I can't wait to hear all the fallout I'm sure where will be some spectacular fireworks. Well done!!!
person carha
schedule December 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG major cliffhanger! Incredible chapters hun, definately can't wait to see what happens when it all comes out!
person Muffy
schedule December 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I had the blinkies. I didn't see that coming with Ron and just how right he is. Harry...I love him. Wonderfully romantic scene for Lucius and Hermione, even if it's a little bitter sweet. I understand Hermione more than I want. Brilliant updates (3 chapters for me) thanks so much and I'm relieved that you and the children are feeling better. Flu sucks bum. Have a great weekend.
schedule December 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chpt. 20

Seriously. Seriously? Seriously!
Sorry I had to get Grey's Anatonmy on you, but OMG.
Seriously?! Ron's NOT cheating???
Oooooooooooooooooooooh, that changes everything.
I'm on Team Ron. I can't help it. It's just wrong now. Not that cheating is right, but I mean I thought he was screwing some witch like Lav-Lav and leaving poor, sad Hermione. Now I realize he's just drinking himself silly because he's super depressed too...well, SHE cheated on him first. That changes everything.
I wish this was a Hermione/Ron story now....and then they realize the error of them both being stupid and find love in each other again.
Sadness.
:`o(

I think I'm still going to keep reading though, although usually at a chapter this like I would stop and shake my head, 'no-no.' But it IS you Miss S_G :o) So I shall continue reading this story...for now :o)
person maddie50
schedule December 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooo, Draco is too perceptive. Well, no one said he is stupid. However, I can see Lucius falling for Hermione.
person maddie50
schedule December 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Their time together sounds beautiful. Their marriages are so cold and lack true affection. Why maintain that for the sake of society?