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by soldiersgirl0709

person Sandra
schedule December 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That is so cruel. Please update soon
person ZukoRocks30
schedule December 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh boy! And it hits the fan!...I think.... How in the world are Lucius and Hermione going to talk their way out of this one?
I can just see Hermione getting red in the face and feeling extremely guilty...while Lucius looks smug and not guilty in the least.
...I kept thinking that Narcissa was going to pluck Hermione's underwear out of Lucius' pocket! Eurg! I'm so glad she didn't! :-)
schedule December 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh.....must update. I am so loving this story. Lucius is usually written as such an ass in most fics, but this one he is human and it is so nice to see that change. Such a wonderful story. Now update!! I demand it!!
person Lady Disdain
schedule December 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good one ;) It is a pity to see Ron finally try, and then Hermione pushes him away. I guess you can expect that kind of behaviour when you leave someone in the cold for so long. Can't wait for an update!
schedule December 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
NO NO NO NO NO!!!! What is wrong with you!?!?!?! You can't leave it just hanging like that? Ther eis no way!!! OMG OMG OMG!

OK. With that out of my system, I am really enjoying this story. it would appear as if they are completely busted... I wonder how Lucius will try to play this off? Will he let Hermione speak? Will Hermione's undergarment come back into play? You are evil leaving it there and not updating again straight away. But I still love it and will wait not so patiently for the next chapter. Excellent work thus far! Can't wait to see how this wraps up and then read what you are working on next!
person Ithilwen
schedule December 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh Shit!! That was what came to me when I read the last of the chapter!

Well the cat's out of the bag, how will they explain this???
person Ashley
schedule December 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OOOOO as the plot thickens! *waits anxiously for another update instead of studying for finals like she should be* What can I say, Lucius and Snape are my weakness and I'll choose them over studying genetics any day...even if I enjoy genetics.
schedule December 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*happybunny hyperventilates*

Yipes! Are they caught, or will they come up with a story to tell Ron, Narcissa, and Harry?

Umm, I'm getting the feeling that this is the type of story that could end with none of them being together. Ron and Hermione divorce, Lucius and Narcissa divorce, but Hermione and Lucius don't end up together. Kind of like Annie Hall, except not quite...

I would really like a happy ending, though I have to admit, a not quite happy ending is probably more realistic. either way, love your writing and your fast updates!
schedule December 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh. My. God.

What a place to be discovered.

I am hiding behind my table waiting for all hell to break loose.

I somewhat hope that they will shock everyone, clear the air and then apparate away together. But life is not a fairy tale, is it?

That chapter was simply hot. Nicely done.
person dtd
schedule December 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW hot hot hot in the smoking room. ohh and I loved the find of the sequins. I'm trying to feel a little badly for Ron, but I don't, for a whole year he has been treating Hermione badly and the Lucius/Hermione relationship is just too darn enticing.