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by soldiersgirl0709

schedule December 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Boy, you certainly painted Cissy as a vindictive bitch. However I can certainly see why Lucius fell out of love with her.
schedule December 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh no! I knew it was going to come out sooner or later, but wow! Leave it to Ron to do the exploding in justified moral outrage in public. LOL! Lovely story! Keep up the good work.
person Citten
schedule December 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh so not a good place to have this converstation!
hi sorry to now just reviewing but i have just started reading your story and i have finally caught up to where you are now! :) i will agree that i usually dont like fics that deal with adultery but i can understand the feelings asoated with this situation. but i did feel bad for ron a couple of chapters ago that he was not do the samething. though with the way he was acting i had assumed the same was happening though now i kinda feel guilty but on the other hand i feel like lucius and dont feel guily at all, ron though did bring this upon his self by not talking and avoiding hermione.
i do hope that you dont keep us waiting to see what happens though cause this is a very private conversation happening in a very, very pubilc place. eak! i am going to go crazy waiting i just know it! :)
schedule December 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhhhhhhhhh, you must LOVE Narcissa. She's good at details.
You say it will work out...define that exactly. LOL

I'm still on Team Ron. Bad Hermione. Bad Lucius.

schedule December 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Uhoh... They are screwed! What a humiliation to have your underwear out in the open on a ball! They had it coming, though, what can I say...

What concernes Ron. In my eyes cheating doesn't get "better" because the other did the same thing. It's just wrong in a (supposed) monogamous relationship. That doesn't mean that there aren't situations in which it is completely understandable to look for comfort elsewhere. Still that doesn't make it right.

I actually think that that's exactly Hermione's problem. She does not feel guilty because she's still in love with Ron, but because she knows that she shouldn't be cheating. No matter how she feels. Though that's exactly the problem: Sometimes you just can't fight your feelings. We'll see what will happen next!

May I borrow Lucius for the next party I attend? Please?
person Steph
schedule December 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have to say, I am on team Ron right now. Poor guy, he just needs time and support, and for his wife to not be cheating on him.
person smmz79
schedule December 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow that was close but they always seem to get caught in these situations... i wonder when they will not be quick enough someone is going to catch them and i am voting on draco he seems way to curious
person Gertie
schedule December 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Gasp! I kept feeling that Lucius was playing with fire, wanting to get caught, the way he kept showing up at Hermoine's house. And now they have been- wow. What a way to end a chapter. The fall out will be interesting- I can't wait.
schedule December 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ut oh, I believe the shit is about to hit the fan...or perhaps Lucius can come up with a quick lie. Perhaps they should seek respective divorces...
person smmz79
schedule December 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG... wow and narcissa never notices anything with her husband other than how miserable he is and she caught that.... wo how are hermione and lucius going talk through this... and harry is noticing too ok so maybe draco will not be the first one to realize what is going on