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March 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful update! Finally Dumbles mans up and apologizes. Well done! Now, on to the ball. Can't wait to see all the pretty frocks; and I expect some hottt lovin' for our couples after the dance, eh? :D
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March 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Have finished celebrating now. LOL Poor Greg, no idea what he was in for when Millie asked him his opinion of dresses, did he? Thank goodness Pansy came along and saved the day. It is sad though, that he is only with her to be with someone, not because he really cares for her in that way. That's not fair on either of them.
I wonder if Mr Patil knew how much he helped rather than hindered the people around him when he carried on the way he did. To be compared to Lucius Malfoy that way, which would have cut deeper than anything else, I am sure must have really sat him back on his arse. As for everyone else, for Draco to speak his mind like that, what a shocker and for a moment there, I really thought Blaise was going to get up and say something too. He's gone rather reflective, hasn't he? Finally clued himself in to what was going on around him. I like that he is trying so much harder now to be civil around Hermione, I think by doing that he will get included in a lot more things now and that will only help him further.
Love how Hermione is really getting into her flirty side and I guess having a wizard who treats her like a woman and not one of the guys has helped by a long shot. Damn, 59 minutes in their time is going to be a heck of a lot longer, isn't it? LMAO
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I wonder if Mr Patil knew how much he helped rather than hindered the people around him when he carried on the way he did. To be compared to Lucius Malfoy that way, which would have cut deeper than anything else, I am sure must have really sat him back on his arse. As for everyone else, for Draco to speak his mind like that, what a shocker and for a moment there, I really thought Blaise was going to get up and say something too. He's gone rather reflective, hasn't he? Finally clued himself in to what was going on around him. I like that he is trying so much harder now to be civil around Hermione, I think by doing that he will get included in a lot more things now and that will only help him further.
Love how Hermione is really getting into her flirty side and I guess having a wizard who treats her like a woman and not one of the guys has helped by a long shot. Damn, 59 minutes in their time is going to be a heck of a lot longer, isn't it? LMAO
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March 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
good chap...i loved the ginny/harry and draco/hermione.....lol to the mil in a bunch of dress poor boy.....im reading deathly hallows again now so it fits so perfectly with you bring up the albus didnt give them enough to go on....cant wait for more
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March 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I shall respond, hon, just as soon as I sober up from celebrating my girlfriends' birthday with a few drinkies afternoon. LMAO Not to mention so I can actually understand what I'm reading. LOL
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March 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey Great chapter btw! ^_^ I thought it was neat who instead of hermione being all mushy and stuff when Dumbledore apologized she got angry heh
oh and i found a mistake well im pretty positive its a mistake, but just thought i'd let you know.
"And, Theo and Pansy had all kinds of shared jokes between them"
isn't it suppose to be parvati ??
n way looking forward to wednesday ^_^
oh and i found a mistake well im pretty positive its a mistake, but just thought i'd let you know.
"And, Theo and Pansy had all kinds of shared jokes between them"
isn't it suppose to be parvati ??
n way looking forward to wednesday ^_^
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March 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This Dumbledore apologies are a strike of genius, this were abslutly needed on the Epiloge the DH..... Keep them coming..
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March 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi! I havnt commented in a while. sorry for my delays on the BLOODY AWESOMES and KUDOS!!!! I just got done with a week of midterms, 6 in all and 2 papers and work.. i was soo busy. but now im on spring break and I get to catch up on all the lovely chapters that i missed. WOW this story gets better and better with each chapter. You are an awesome writer and your stories rock!!!! keep up the wonderful work! I cannot wait to read more. love yah!!! :-)
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March 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful! Same dress, just different colors, That made me burst out laughing. 25 dresses? Poor Greg, So have you come up with the right girl for him yet? Will we meet her soon?
The girl that blasted into Blaise last chapter sounds good.
Glad to see Blaise thinking things thru now.
So... Harry & Ginny now?... Nice spell.
Draco & Hermione, Savoring the wait dear.
So... Have you thought about maybe writeing for Playboy, Hustler, JUGGS?
Youv'e got the talent.
I had my husband read this chapter. I asked him what he thought of it? He said to me, "I'm going to go take a shower."
And he did too.
Another excellent, Bravo chapter, "Hands Down."
see ya wednesday
P.S.
Bonnie is a nice girl. Just got rid of a Bonnie Write wannabe for her. And a Tom Felton Wannabe too. That was fun. Ever want to get rid of a wannabe, throw legal mumbo jumbo at them and they run! I copy and pasted the whole conversation with the Tom wannabe onto a WORD document if ya want to check out my work sometime. lol They have dubbed me "the Terminater" It was really funny, as I was having it out with him, I had others cheering me on! "You go girl! Rip his face off! Get that sob! You would have loved it. In the end, he deleted out his account. The Bonnie one, I just told her that Bonnie is upset with her using copy writed pictures and using her name. Then I sent her the twitter rules about pretenders. She's gone...
Catch ya later!
Pat
The girl that blasted into Blaise last chapter sounds good.
Glad to see Blaise thinking things thru now.
So... Harry & Ginny now?... Nice spell.
Draco & Hermione, Savoring the wait dear.
So... Have you thought about maybe writeing for Playboy, Hustler, JUGGS?
Youv'e got the talent.
I had my husband read this chapter. I asked him what he thought of it? He said to me, "I'm going to go take a shower."
And he did too.
Another excellent, Bravo chapter, "Hands Down."
see ya wednesday
P.S.
Bonnie is a nice girl. Just got rid of a Bonnie Write wannabe for her. And a Tom Felton Wannabe too. That was fun. Ever want to get rid of a wannabe, throw legal mumbo jumbo at them and they run! I copy and pasted the whole conversation with the Tom wannabe onto a WORD document if ya want to check out my work sometime. lol They have dubbed me "the Terminater" It was really funny, as I was having it out with him, I had others cheering me on! "You go girl! Rip his face off! Get that sob! You would have loved it. In the end, he deleted out his account. The Bonnie one, I just told her that Bonnie is upset with her using copy writed pictures and using her name. Then I sent her the twitter rules about pretenders. She's gone...
Catch ya later!
Pat
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March 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love how you focused on Draco and Harry in this - they each won a prize in this one. Draco won Hermione outside and Harry won Snape, in a way. Okay not quite the same - LOL.
Hot damn that outside lite smutness was so deliciously decadent. I think you captured two exploring young adults so well. Their movements, reactions and eagerness was clear from the carefully chosen words. I think I'll have to go back and re-read it.
You have the best school ideas, I really liked the classroom scene - how fun and challenging. And to think that Harry saved the "day." Poor Draco was so damn annoyed by the Boy Who Lived to Piss Him Off. Then he had to go and deal with him when visiting Tonks. Of course, leave it to her to make things clear to all the male dunderheads: they are all family. Teddy loves both of those boys so they better get their act together or she will beat them senseless. I gave Remus a few points for being kind to Draco, who needs it by the way. He not only craves the closeness and support that comes from family (oh he may have acted begrudgingly about going but he secretly wanted to see the Lupins) but he needs it. Now that he's on this path with only himself to guide him, as I pointed out in another review, he needs beacons to keep him grounded. Hermione can only offer so much, having a strong and supportive role model is important.
I think that this is interesting: Harry and Draco are connected and might become close because of the Lupins, Remus will eventually warm up to Draco and try to help him more, Draco and Snape are close because of the nature of their relationship - Snape loves that boy, Draco will be a connection between Snape and Remus - they will both care for him. So perfect, eventually.
Sigh -- again the scene between Hermione and Draco was HOT HOT HOT.
Hot damn that outside lite smutness was so deliciously decadent. I think you captured two exploring young adults so well. Their movements, reactions and eagerness was clear from the carefully chosen words. I think I'll have to go back and re-read it.
You have the best school ideas, I really liked the classroom scene - how fun and challenging. And to think that Harry saved the "day." Poor Draco was so damn annoyed by the Boy Who Lived to Piss Him Off. Then he had to go and deal with him when visiting Tonks. Of course, leave it to her to make things clear to all the male dunderheads: they are all family. Teddy loves both of those boys so they better get their act together or she will beat them senseless. I gave Remus a few points for being kind to Draco, who needs it by the way. He not only craves the closeness and support that comes from family (oh he may have acted begrudgingly about going but he secretly wanted to see the Lupins) but he needs it. Now that he's on this path with only himself to guide him, as I pointed out in another review, he needs beacons to keep him grounded. Hermione can only offer so much, having a strong and supportive role model is important.
I think that this is interesting: Harry and Draco are connected and might become close because of the Lupins, Remus will eventually warm up to Draco and try to help him more, Draco and Snape are close because of the nature of their relationship - Snape loves that boy, Draco will be a connection between Snape and Remus - they will both care for him. So perfect, eventually.
Sigh -- again the scene between Hermione and Draco was HOT HOT HOT.
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March 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I must say, I don't think this happened too quickly. We're in the 38th chapter for Merlin's sake. LOL ;) And they have a long history together where the sparks always flew between them even if they didn't know why and yes, at that age, when you're in the fresh throes of passion, even a week feels like forever so in my opinion, you have nothing to apologise for. :) Not that I think less of anyone who wanted a lot more tension to build between the two.
For someone who had admitted he isn't 'that' experienced - DAMN!!!! LOL Insert my usual mantra here. ;) I think your descriptions of Hermione's first real 'heavy' session were perfect. It's so hard to describe what you're feeling and why parts of your body are reacting the way they do or why it is you know that you have to have more and Hermione, more than most, would have trouble letting go and just 'feeling' rather than trying to think about what as happening between them. I love the glimpse into Draco's head and know he was nervous too because he wanted her to think he was 'beautiful' as well.
I can't speak for Draco, of course, but imagining a sexy Snape naked wouldn't help me at all. LMAO Hermione's first time of seeing hard male flesh, perfectly described too and I love that she wasn't afraid to touch him, in awe, yes, but wanting to give him the same pleasure he had given her - perfect. And I'm p-ing myself laughing at her teasing him and not saying I love you back to him - gotta love that girl. LMAO
How could they not fear a pop quiz?? It's been years since I was at school and still the thought of it - yeesh!! Hmmm is Peyton going to get a good talking to now? (lucky witch) LOL Poor Neville, I so wanted him to be braver but I know how Snape effects him so. But what a reaction, sending that spell his way and having Harry protect him. I don't know who was the more shocked. And it brought about the kind of attention that Harry hates. I wonder how Snape feels about it all.
The whole visiting with Remus, Tonks and Teddy - LOVED IT. From her sticking it to all the men, Harry and Draco's truce even if they weren't sure what to do about it to Teddy falling asleep on Draco. Made me think of the time in that other chapter when Draco was thinking to himself that if Teddy liked him the he must be a good person because kids were in tune to things like that. In all a very big AWWWWWWWWWWWWW moment. Oh and the joking about Tonk's hair colours - PRICELESS!!!
Oh you so don't want to see a picture of me with a "Joker" like grin on my face. LMAO I don't see Luna as Looney either. She's in Ravenclaw for a reason, after all. And of course this story is very 'serious stuff' (addictive) to me. I can't see Remus and Severus being good friends any more than I can really see Harry and Draco being life long pals but I can imagine all four of them reaching a point where they could respect one another. No Aussie reference with the 'Beans and Quirke', I just found that funny.
For someone who had admitted he isn't 'that' experienced - DAMN!!!! LOL Insert my usual mantra here. ;) I think your descriptions of Hermione's first real 'heavy' session were perfect. It's so hard to describe what you're feeling and why parts of your body are reacting the way they do or why it is you know that you have to have more and Hermione, more than most, would have trouble letting go and just 'feeling' rather than trying to think about what as happening between them. I love the glimpse into Draco's head and know he was nervous too because he wanted her to think he was 'beautiful' as well.
I can't speak for Draco, of course, but imagining a sexy Snape naked wouldn't help me at all. LMAO Hermione's first time of seeing hard male flesh, perfectly described too and I love that she wasn't afraid to touch him, in awe, yes, but wanting to give him the same pleasure he had given her - perfect. And I'm p-ing myself laughing at her teasing him and not saying I love you back to him - gotta love that girl. LMAO
How could they not fear a pop quiz?? It's been years since I was at school and still the thought of it - yeesh!! Hmmm is Peyton going to get a good talking to now? (lucky witch) LOL Poor Neville, I so wanted him to be braver but I know how Snape effects him so. But what a reaction, sending that spell his way and having Harry protect him. I don't know who was the more shocked. And it brought about the kind of attention that Harry hates. I wonder how Snape feels about it all.
The whole visiting with Remus, Tonks and Teddy - LOVED IT. From her sticking it to all the men, Harry and Draco's truce even if they weren't sure what to do about it to Teddy falling asleep on Draco. Made me think of the time in that other chapter when Draco was thinking to himself that if Teddy liked him the he must be a good person because kids were in tune to things like that. In all a very big AWWWWWWWWWWWWW moment. Oh and the joking about Tonk's hair colours - PRICELESS!!!
Oh you so don't want to see a picture of me with a "Joker" like grin on my face. LMAO I don't see Luna as Looney either. She's in Ravenclaw for a reason, after all. And of course this story is very 'serious stuff' (addictive) to me. I can't see Remus and Severus being good friends any more than I can really see Harry and Draco being life long pals but I can imagine all four of them reaching a point where they could respect one another. No Aussie reference with the 'Beans and Quirke', I just found that funny.