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Very intimate moment, I was going awwww. and then I went oh! and then I went WHAT?!!! Hermione wasn't a virgin after-all? I am sitting here wondering who did the deed, and could recall only two moments, when it could have happened make that a possible three. Krum, could-a done it, Lockhart could-a done it, Hell, he coulda done half the school, he was an expert with memory charms and Hermione did think he was pretty wonderful... Then there was Malfoy manor when she was being tortured, Lucius could-a went for the forbidden fruit. That would kill Draco. I'll take "the Lockhart did it" vote! Hope it's part of the story now. lol (or I just read into your story on a new level you hadn't thought of. Hemmmmmmmmm....)I do do that quite often, drives writers insane! By the way, did I say wonderful chapter? Still think it is cute the way the guys are the ones having the questains about futures, marriage and children. The girls all seem to want to wait, but would consider it in the future. lol That was great! ( did I ever tell you that when I was dateing my future husband, that he told me three months into the relationship that"He was going to marry me someday?" Unbelievable relationship we had. Tons of drama! You would love it. Did I mention this was a great chapter? (It's a great chapter!) Ta Ta .
P.S. Yes, I did send Tom Felton the link to your story. And you should give Twitter a go, there are a ton of authors, writers and publishing houses there. You really should talk to the pro's, Ask questains. You my dear, need to be published in print. There is your advice for the day. ;-)

Theo is such a little hothead with his emotions. He's usually the calm, collected one but Vati seems to make him lose all his control. How sweet! And they have each other and their friends to support their decision. The Nott curse was a hilarious add on by the way.

Ron and Pansy are so cute - and she's so honest in her feelings. I hope Ron understands and sees that. I'm rather proud of your Ron - he's not a prat. I couldn't believe he actually said that to Draco.

I really liked this chapter - Blaise in particular is just fascinating. He's like the lone wolf of the pack, sitting by the sidelines watching, learning and interjecting when necessary. He's part of the group yet apart. Good to know he feels. And yes, I would gladly challenge Dreamweaver to a mud wrestling contest for Blaise - of course he's have to be there to watch! LOL Bring it on! :-)

This was as I expected spectacular... Love it... Bravo... LOL

BRAVO - a realistic and honest first time. Thank you for keeping it real sweetie. Oh Draco, work up that stamina for goodness sakes! I agree about earning that title LOL

Nuff said...no great big insightful review I'm afraid as I really just liked the realism of this chapter. And Draco looking sheepish was too funny.

PS: are you on LJ

Hey another Bloody Awesome chapter!!! Great job on it. I cannot wait to read more!!1

amazing chap...thats so cute with theo...haha snape caught them...lol....sry i didnt review last chap....

couldn't remember if I gave a review for this chapter, so I re-read it, Smirking here and waiting patiently to see who will be Gregs luckey lady. And Blaise with Luna? I can see that... Thanks , I enjoyed the kill! Don't kill me, but I sent Tom Felton your story, version HPFF. Believe it or not, he does read fan fiction once in awhile. This story was the first thing that popped into my head, so I did. I recomend your writings all the time, why not Tom Felton? lol.

All right! A marriage proposal, and that led to harry revolting! lol Of all of them I never thought of him as being the one to get upset about one of the guys proposing to their girl. Someone had to be first, right? And Wonderful Ron is winning me over as having a great personality. (Harry is in my dog house) I really can't wait for Wednesday. Still giving wonder to Greg... Ta Ta !!!

Poor Ron alwaya Snape ruin his fun... LOL

Hi--would you please tell us where the other site is? When you referenced that on the last chapter, I had a vague recollection...thanks!