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March 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
who thinks there pregnant?...looks like there might be hope for harrp/draco to get along....loved chap...cant wait for more...
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March 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This cliffhanger was simply evil............... LOL Too much going on and I hope that you already started the sequel of this... Keep them coming ....
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March 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lol love the last secret
"Nargles are real" lol
great chapter
"Nargles are real" lol
great chapter
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March 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really liked the last chapter. I particularly enjoyed trying to match the secrets with the speakers. The way you've drawn all your characters is so realistic and vivid. I am sorry this story is almost at an end, though. :(
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March 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Horseback riding! Your killing me! All my theory-izing, All of it, Ka put! Damn maybe the next story I'll get something right? lol
This chapter I could tell you got totally into. Fidallis practice. That is what it took for these students to come out with their one true deep down secret. Cool. So, whos got the bun in the oven? Milly or Ginny? Wouldn't put it past Milly, questain now is will she tell the father, or are you going to save that for the next story? Make it a good scene, full of drama,
Harry, your going to be a father, I'm pregnant. Harry's face went whiter than the first snow. Harry, did you hear me? Ginny snaps her fingers in front of Harry's face and he blinks rapidly. Excuse me, do I know you? (Harry has lost his memory. lol!)
Wow what a way to end a chapter. I think I'm preganant, Nargles are real! You know how wonderful you are, right? Or do I have to remind you another half a million more times?
Right now, I need bed, it's late. See ya on the flip side of the moon!
Patty
Just noticed the security words, want a laugh? their WIENER Fitts LOL! For Real!
This chapter I could tell you got totally into. Fidallis practice. That is what it took for these students to come out with their one true deep down secret. Cool. So, whos got the bun in the oven? Milly or Ginny? Wouldn't put it past Milly, questain now is will she tell the father, or are you going to save that for the next story? Make it a good scene, full of drama,
Harry, your going to be a father, I'm pregnant. Harry's face went whiter than the first snow. Harry, did you hear me? Ginny snaps her fingers in front of Harry's face and he blinks rapidly. Excuse me, do I know you? (Harry has lost his memory. lol!)
Wow what a way to end a chapter. I think I'm preganant, Nargles are real! You know how wonderful you are, right? Or do I have to remind you another half a million more times?
Right now, I need bed, it's late. See ya on the flip side of the moon!
Patty
Just noticed the security words, want a laugh? their WIENER Fitts LOL! For Real!
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March 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Finally, some time to myself. LOL What an interesting 'deep and meaningful' conversation Hermione and Draco had. Trying to sus out what the other wanted while still being true to themselves and what they think they might want out of life. At least they knew not to rush into anything. You can't just take it back once those kiddies come along (not without a lot of emotional damage at any rate). And it's obvious that Draco HAS been thinking about it and wondering what kind of a father he would be despite the rather dubious role model he had.
Love the banter they share and how Hermione makes a joke of everything everytime Draco is semi-serious. A defence mechanaism perhaps? Or she is really getting good at teasing him. LOL And I think I would be entranced by Draco's husky voice too.
Their first time was perfect as one would it expect it to be, no screaming down the walls in an OMG orgasm, just a pleasant experience with a promise of more to come. I'm sure there's only a lucky few that get it right the first time. It was very tender and honest which is probably what I liked the most. That and Draco's promise to do better next time. ;) LMAO
LMAO I am sure you'd be a welcome participant in the Slytherin Groupie Club. ;) Agreed, I can see Blaise having to struggle with the whole idea of girls' issues too but he has Margaritama and I to help him out as soon as we have our little wrestle. Hope she knows a good bubblehead charm. LOL I think they should all (our favourite Slytherin boys) come down and watch the show - mud and all. LMAO Yes, love Ron in this story and I'm glad you liked my silly joke too. LOL
Love the banter they share and how Hermione makes a joke of everything everytime Draco is semi-serious. A defence mechanaism perhaps? Or she is really getting good at teasing him. LOL And I think I would be entranced by Draco's husky voice too.
Their first time was perfect as one would it expect it to be, no screaming down the walls in an OMG orgasm, just a pleasant experience with a promise of more to come. I'm sure there's only a lucky few that get it right the first time. It was very tender and honest which is probably what I liked the most. That and Draco's promise to do better next time. ;) LMAO
LMAO I am sure you'd be a welcome participant in the Slytherin Groupie Club. ;) Agreed, I can see Blaise having to struggle with the whole idea of girls' issues too but he has Margaritama and I to help him out as soon as we have our little wrestle. Hope she knows a good bubblehead charm. LOL I think they should all (our favourite Slytherin boys) come down and watch the show - mud and all. LMAO Yes, love Ron in this story and I'm glad you liked my silly joke too. LOL
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March 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i loved that scene...about time they had some 'fun'....cant wait for an update!
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March 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, that was as sweet a 'first time' scene as I've read. Realistic and romantic at the same time. Well done! ;D
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March 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yay!!! the deed is done lol! I love that you didnt over do it, it was perfect and left me wanting more!! ^_^ great chapter
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March 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, that was a perfect way to lose one's virginity. The conversation about marriage and kids was confusing and heartfelt at the same time. After all at 18 do any of us truly know what we want? In the end they both said the same thing, yes but not right now. (Even if Draco kind of rambled on, he won't let her go so of course he wants marriage and kids eventually, he just hasn't officially excepted it yet!)
Their coming together was awkward and sweet, the way a first time should be. Each partner struggles to learn exactly what works for the other and Hermione is right, a girl doesn't always orgasm on her first time anyway. There is no doubt in my mind that Draco will make it up to her many many times.
Loved the whole chapter, thought it was more about hope than anything....the hope that what they have is strong enough to see them through whatever else life throws at them, the hope that they'll make it together (though neither ever actually voices that or even thinks it - i feel its more of an understated thing!) LOL honestly just another in a long line of brilliantly written chapters by you. You are definitely a master of subtlety when it comes to writing! =)
Love and Hugs!
Lady B*
Their coming together was awkward and sweet, the way a first time should be. Each partner struggles to learn exactly what works for the other and Hermione is right, a girl doesn't always orgasm on her first time anyway. There is no doubt in my mind that Draco will make it up to her many many times.
Loved the whole chapter, thought it was more about hope than anything....the hope that what they have is strong enough to see them through whatever else life throws at them, the hope that they'll make it together (though neither ever actually voices that or even thinks it - i feel its more of an understated thing!) LOL honestly just another in a long line of brilliantly written chapters by you. You are definitely a master of subtlety when it comes to writing! =)
Love and Hugs!
Lady B*