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schedule December 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, sorry to give you a poor review, but I don't think you've captured Ginny's true essence at all, and frankly her childish actions are enough to make me stop reading this fan fic.

She handled everything else gracefully, why does she now have to act like she's reverted in age? Ginny has always been underestimated by people, and I think you've done just that.
schedule December 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok its been a few chapters since i reviewed.....forgive me! This story is moving a long at a wonderful pace. I am loving the tension between the new group, the awkwardness and the attractions. I think we can all understand what Pansy is going thru, liking someone and not being sure if they like you back. Poor Greg, to have his feelings for Hermione outed like that, but better him than Malfoy at the moment.

Ron it seems has some regrets about his relationship with Hermione, she apparently does not! Ron is also a suspicious prat!

Poor Ginny, I could totally empathize with her feelings. She did everything Harry asked of her as the War was being fought, she is right that now he needs to consider her feelings, not just his own. I could only imagine the dumbfounded expression on Harry's face while she was yelling at him.

Also, I love that we got two chapters for the price of one....LOL! You've made my night!

Happy New Years!!!

Lady B*
schedule December 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey! well you do deserve the Bloody Awesome!!! you are awesome!!
great job and I cannot wait to read more!
schedule December 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So I read all 15 Chapters today and am pleased to say that i love this story its very unique and stands out from all of the stories i've have read in the past. I really enjoy your method of writing and am looking forward to the following chapters! =]
person kazfeist
schedule December 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Didn't realize you'd updated twice during the holidays! Just wanted to say, again, how much I love this story. I'm glad you've used Snape for Blaise. I don't think he'd be able to talk to anyone else, and Snape's got his best interests at heart, I think. Can't wait for more. :D
schedule December 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
another awesome chapter! you are brilliant!!! bloody awesome!!!
i cannot wait to see what happens next. hmm is Blaise going to attack Draco now, or what??? eeehh i am soo excited to read more!!!
schedule December 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, I love how Pansy is so integral...it really adds a dimension and depth that give this fic a richness all its own. Cannot wait for D/G action - I'm sure Draco hasn't lost any hotness - yummy.
schedule December 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok, what I think I love most about this story is how realistic it is - no really, sans epilogue, this could have been their 7th year. And I'm loving this new Draco - he's still no one to be reckoned with (a bad ass will always be a bad ass) but he's channeling himself into more positive efforts. Notice I don't say good cause I think there will always be a bit of darkness in Draco, he's been through too much in his young life. However, I think he could still lead a positive life. Sigh, cannot wait for Draco/Hermione action. And when will Ron notice the lovely Pansy?
person Anon
schedule December 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Now to review properly without the tears to get in the way. (And I've already taken off my make up - ;) LOL) Ah so Draco found Pansy singing and humming and actually being happy. That's kind of sad that he'd be so shocked by it considering he's supposed to be spending 'the rest of his life' with her. I do like that he described her as someone worth marrying even though he didn't want it to be him. And FINALLY, they are actually talking.

Wow, she really told him what she thought, didn't she? It's like a dam has been broken and everything she's been keeping penned up for years has been released - the flood gates are open. And she's gone and said too much again, hasn't she? Well, (laughs) she did happen to slip a crucial bit of information about Hermione being SINGLE as a bonus. But oh, the poor thing. Now she's terrfied of what Hermione and Ginny will think of her after saying too much. She has really become quite close to them in such a short time and now she fears she's just thrown it all away. I'd be just as furious (within the fear) with Draco as myself for all that too.

And there he goes, sitting back and thinking it all over. Getting upset because he knows a lot of what she said is true but I also think he knows that belongs with the old Draco and he doesn't want to be that wizard any more. (LMAO on Theo coming in and his backchat comment to Draco - I was amused) I love that he stopped Pansy from storming back out (no doubt off to do some damage control) and told her how he felt too and I'm glad that both he and Pansy could believe what he said. And Theo's response to what he overheard between the two of them - perfection itself. :)

I love that you are a conduit writer - it all works for me (okay, even the times when I cry) LOL And of course, there's no need for me to tell you how much I'm looking forward to the AHEM part. LMAO More please!!!!!!
person kazfeist
schedule December 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter...and thanks for having Draco be man enough to nip Pansy's fears in the bud. Can't wait for more. :D