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January 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
"Blaise watched Hermione and Pansy part at the door, and stared at her bouncy mass of curls"
Hmm, is it me or does Blaise notice ALOT of intricate things about Hermione - her "bouncing curls"? Really? Blaise is so torn and I hope that his internal struggles don't leave him so bitter so young. I really enjoyed the dressing down that Blaise and Hermione got though I feel they were rather harse on her. Blaise was the one that instigated the arguments with Hermione defending herself. I know that it created tension but I think I would have felt the same way. I think the her guilt and slight annoyance at "having" to apologize is what made her hands tremble. Also, perhaps her not eating a bit of foreshadowing somehow? Fainting? Draco coming to the rescue?
And Draco, though not saying much in this chapter, was FELT. I think he's so in his head that he's becoming rather obsessed. He better ask her out soon or he'll combust. What he and Hermione need is a good SNOG!
Ron, Ron, Ron - he needs to just mind his own business. He's so aware of everyone else that he's a nuisance. It's also what makes him blind to Pansy's affections - which are SO CLEAR AND LOUD. I have to say I was surprised that Ginny took Harry's hand, it sends mixed signals. But Theo's level-headed discussion with Harry should hopefully help. Give the girl a bit of space.
Yeah, that last line was also awesome! I love this story. Can't wait for Wed.
Hmm, is it me or does Blaise notice ALOT of intricate things about Hermione - her "bouncing curls"? Really? Blaise is so torn and I hope that his internal struggles don't leave him so bitter so young. I really enjoyed the dressing down that Blaise and Hermione got though I feel they were rather harse on her. Blaise was the one that instigated the arguments with Hermione defending herself. I know that it created tension but I think I would have felt the same way. I think the her guilt and slight annoyance at "having" to apologize is what made her hands tremble. Also, perhaps her not eating a bit of foreshadowing somehow? Fainting? Draco coming to the rescue?
And Draco, though not saying much in this chapter, was FELT. I think he's so in his head that he's becoming rather obsessed. He better ask her out soon or he'll combust. What he and Hermione need is a good SNOG!
Ron, Ron, Ron - he needs to just mind his own business. He's so aware of everyone else that he's a nuisance. It's also what makes him blind to Pansy's affections - which are SO CLEAR AND LOUD. I have to say I was surprised that Ginny took Harry's hand, it sends mixed signals. But Theo's level-headed discussion with Harry should hopefully help. Give the girl a bit of space.
Yeah, that last line was also awesome! I love this story. Can't wait for Wed.
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January 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Gosh, the power to steer a story plot will go to my head, if you're not careful. ;) Thanks for the lovely update. I am enjoying how complex the Slytherins are, more and more. Keep up the good work. :D
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January 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay For Sunday!!!! loved the new chapter btw. Some more Dramione action would nice tho =] looking forward to Wednesday
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January 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
And Greg and Draco have thrown down the gauntlet...yeah, I was wondering. Oh, don't let Greg be alone! He deserves someone and I do think that he and Hermione could be GREAT FRIENDS!
Loved all the internal monolgues in this chapter. They really showed how well everyone is changing and we're along for the ride - OH THE DRAMA. Where's my popcorn.
Loving Theo - I call him Hot Nott! Yeah, he and Padma are so sweet. But don't let my hunky sly Slytherins be too damn nice! You should do sneak peeks of the upcoming chapter - like a next week's episode thing...this is after all CW's new show....ROFL! SOME DRAMIONE ACTION -- PLEASE MAKE IT HOT!
Loved all the internal monolgues in this chapter. They really showed how well everyone is changing and we're along for the ride - OH THE DRAMA. Where's my popcorn.
Loving Theo - I call him Hot Nott! Yeah, he and Padma are so sweet. But don't let my hunky sly Slytherins be too damn nice! You should do sneak peeks of the upcoming chapter - like a next week's episode thing...this is after all CW's new show....ROFL! SOME DRAMIONE ACTION -- PLEASE MAKE IT HOT!
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January 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I've got to say I really enjoy your Theo. He has matured so much. I think he and Parvati are an great idea as a couple. Will we see Theo try to talk to Harry about Ginny? I think that would be an interesting conversation.
I love Hermione and Draco's introspective thoughts. It lets us get to know whats in their head. I truly hope Pansy can come up with a great plan to get them together, and I see that Theo caught on to her way of thinking as well. I wonder if he will offer Pansy his help as well....lol.
Blaise, Blaise, Blaise *shakes head and tsks* it's time to get over that fear of change and embrace the future. Now that he'll be partnered with Ginny I wonder if he will accept it or continue all his nonsense. IT struly my belief that he is clinging to what he knows because the unknown is to overwhelming for him. I hope he sees the error of his ways before someone gets hurt.
Greg - he is so sweet in this fic, and I'm sorry that both his friends have hurt his feelings. I hope some sweet Hufflepuff comes along to make him happy ;-)
Draco and Hermione are potions partners.......yay! LOL can't wait to see what awkward moments might happen now.
Keep up the good work and I can't wait to read more =)
Lady B*
xoxoxo
I love Hermione and Draco's introspective thoughts. It lets us get to know whats in their head. I truly hope Pansy can come up with a great plan to get them together, and I see that Theo caught on to her way of thinking as well. I wonder if he will offer Pansy his help as well....lol.
Blaise, Blaise, Blaise *shakes head and tsks* it's time to get over that fear of change and embrace the future. Now that he'll be partnered with Ginny I wonder if he will accept it or continue all his nonsense. IT struly my belief that he is clinging to what he knows because the unknown is to overwhelming for him. I hope he sees the error of his ways before someone gets hurt.
Greg - he is so sweet in this fic, and I'm sorry that both his friends have hurt his feelings. I hope some sweet Hufflepuff comes along to make him happy ;-)
Draco and Hermione are potions partners.......yay! LOL can't wait to see what awkward moments might happen now.
Keep up the good work and I can't wait to read more =)
Lady B*
xoxoxo
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January 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, I see you've certainly provided the physical push we discussed. :D
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January 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Loved the chapter!! My only complaint is I was so into the reading that I was disappointed it was over so quickly!
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January 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
eeeek partners huh? nice move lol. Post soon plz =]
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January 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oooh yay another awesome chapter!!!! keep up the great work! i loved the way how snape paired everyone up according to their skills... hmm i wonder when things between Hermione and Draco start heating up.. lol
cannot wait to read more!
cannot wait to read more!
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January 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Loved the newest chapter. And goodon Pansy for trying to do the push. I think both our love-birds need it. :D