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schedule February 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
another awesome chapter!!!! great job!!! Bloody awesome idea about the musical chairs. I used to love playing that game when I was younger.
I cannor wait to read more!!!
person Anon
schedule February 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Finally (gulps because she knows there are four chapters to catch up on) I can rabbit on. LOL I would love to have seen the purebloods' faces when they went bowling. And I'm annoyed at Lavender too even though I know she thinks she's doing the right thing. I thought it was cool that Pansy calmed herself by thinking 'what would Hermione do' and remembering something the witch she admires said. It's interesting to see how she and Draco saw for the first time what the Weasley family was like and how different it was from their own. And what an awwweeee moment for Greg when he realised he had friends too.

And another awwwweeee moment for Ron's birthday speech for Hermione at the Grangers house! LOL Very sweet. And hey, no making this reader cry!!!! LOVE what her dad said too (apart from the crying, that is)

Love Millie's comment about the muggle made food. LOL Looks like she's slowly starting to bring down the wall she hides behind too. LMAO at everyone's reactions to Draco admitting he'd been reading about Hermione. I thought there were supposed to be secrets at Hogwarts, clearly Draco's feelings for Hermione isn't one of them. I liked the family tradition of passing down the house to the oldest daughter too, about time people realised having a daughter is a worthwhile thing too!!!!

LMAO - of the issue of the teeth - I can so picture Draco squirming in his chair over that one at the remembered thought. And I'm still wondering how they managed to fit so much into a single day - there wasn't a time turner around by any chance??? LOL And Hermione sure cleaned up with the birthday presents, didn't she? I have a feeling being allowed to use muggle technology in her room is going to come back into play further down the track (all puns intended). ;)

Oh I love Hermione's dress and the idea of the Coming Out Ball too, I say again, how did they fit all this into one day? LOL Hmmm, it was Draco's idea for that dress huh, I wonder what he'd choose for me? *evil grin* And aww again at the look Harry was giving Ginny. :)

Yep, I totally get Molly, she's fierce but loving and more importantly she admits when she's wrong (eventually). LOL And yes, I suppose I can wait a little longer for more fiesty scenes but I am enjoying the romance even if that's not normally a me thing to do.
person Anon
schedule February 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ha ha ha, got to love the headspin that Hermione is in knowing that Draco 'chose' her dress. I can't wait to 'see' his face when he sees her coming down the stairs. And what a lovely father/daughter moment too. And he put his fears to rest very elequently as he told her what he thought of the whole Draco situation and indeed if any man should dare to harm his 'little girl' again.

The 'ball' sounds wonderful too, I wish I was right there partying too only I might have influenced the story too much. ;) LOL And there you go, Hermione's realised just how high a pedestal Pansy has put her on, too. And I liked that Luna knew she belonged to the group. I'm glad she finally felt she belonged somewhere too. Oh what a reaction she got from Draco, I was right on the steps with that one and I don't need Legilmency to know what he and indeed she were thinking right then. Heh heh!

Uhoh, what's with Pansy and the drinking? Where's that coming from? Obivously it's not the first time she's drunk enough to make a fool of herself if Greg's come over to keep an eye on her. Oh this is a worry. Mmm close enough to feel the heat between them - oh yeah, baby!! LOL And you gotta love Ginny's 'subtle' escape too. And oh the whole conversation between them and the dancing and where he put his hands, I'd swoon if I wasn't afraid to fall off my chair. LOL

Bloody Hell Harry - Piss Off and let them dance for goodness sake!!! What? He didn't hear me? Well sorry Ginny but I might just have to hex your butthead boyfriend. LOL But you made up for it by having Ron realise Draco really cares for her and for them all to give him the green light if he wanted to pursue Hermione as well as a warning for what would happen if things went badly. And awwwwwwww again for the almost hugging moment. (sigh)
schedule February 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
amazing as always...can't wait for more..loved the musical chair part...
person Jullsy
schedule February 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I didn't expect that Draco will be so shy and romantic with the rose :). I liked it. But I should say that my romantic nature is still not satisfied lol
schedule February 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
"She wondered briefly if Ron
person kazfeist
schedule February 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Lovely chapter. I'm glad Blaise will start to heal, now. Have I said before how much I love your Ginny? In so many Dramione fics, she's one-dimensional: either a jealous, obsessive harpy or an enamoured, pregnant, Harry-acolyte. Here, she's realistic enough that I want to have lunch and take in a movie with her on Girls' Night Out. :D
schedule February 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
good chap...ginny is so nice...im hoping for some draco/hermione action!!!!
schedule February 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to let you know that I am still reading, and loving this story. If I could, I would hug you for it. It's amazing. XD

<3
person Anon
schedule February 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Bah!! I thought I was only one chapter behind but it's two going on three. I'll catch up soon, my dear. :)