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person kazfeist
schedule February 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Loved Ron standing up for Pansy. Very nicely done! :D
schedule February 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice move from Ron....
schedule February 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
awwies great chapter!!! yay Pansy and Ron are finally together and Vati nd Theo finally told each other how they felll... Great chapter like always!!
person Anon
schedule February 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aww poor Pansy having to watch her crush dancing with someone else, my heart aches for her. I can understand how she'd think the bubbly might help but in the long run, it won't, it's just a temporary fix (and I use the term 'fix' loosely). Having said that, I know a lot of people think Ron can be thick and unobservant but I dunno, I reckon he's noticed Pansy looking at him by now, could be a bad guess on my part, of course. LOL I'm good at seeing things that aren't there. LMAO And aww there's Draco coming to her rescue, that's so sweet. I like that he still cares for her and feels free to show her a better friendship now than what they had before. Oh no, what's Molly going to do!!!!!

LOL Well mother hen came to the fore there, didn't it but I don't blame Draco for being wary after the previous outburst. But she's apologised for it, I thought she would, she acts first and thinks second and even though that's wrong, I can see why she'd be that way. It takes a big person to admit they're wrong about something so I'm glad she had the courage to tell Pansy that. Poor Pansy, she must be so confused, being attacked one minute and being cared for the next. I actually think Molly would be quite happy if they got together. And I loved that she helped Pansy with her make-up and tell her if anything happened between Pansy and Ron then they'd be happy about it. Not sure that Ron is always a good judge of character though but he's grown up a bit so perhaps he's learned to tell the difference a little better. :)
No surprise that Draco was waiting outside to make sure things were okay but what a laugh that Molly is 'continuing surveillance'. LMAO

Can't wait to hear Pansy and Hermione's conversation about the day and I laughed at the thought of Pansy rushing away to write it down in her diary - ah I remember those days well. LOL OMG Draco and that bewitched rose making its way to Hermione - now that's a perfect ending for the day and damn isn't that Theo an observant buggar. LOL That was very sweet - pity Draco ran away before she could say thank you!!!!

NOw I know I say 'I love this bit' a lot (because it's true) but wow, this whole part on Blaise just blew me away. He so needed to do that, just let his frustrations out and and let it rip and yet he still had the control and foresight to take it out on inanimate objects, he didn't hurt anyone in the process and then for Ginny to come in and take over and let him know that she'd take care of things, well that spoke volumes to me so I hope that it spoke volumes to Blaise too. And you made me cry again!!!!!! Arrrrrrrrrrgggggggggggggggggg!!!!!! I'd be quite happy to hold him close and let him get those tears out and thank goodness he read in Ginny's eyes what she was trying to convey. And he knows Pansy's right there for him too now. I don't think he realised that they were still there for him, not that they really knew how to show it either.

And there goes Ginny again being peacemaker - when did she get to be this good? I imagine her to be more like Molly I guess and always be at war with her brothers, being the youngest and only sister, she'd have to be able to fight for herself. Guess she's more like her dad, he always seemed to see both sides of the story. Had to laugh when she compared Draco to Ron, smiling through tears must be a really good look, eh? LOL Of course, Molly would have passed on the mother hen bit and taking care of people when they need her, I can see that too. Now I have to find tissues - you owe me a box of them by now. LOL ;)
person Anon
schedule February 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I wonder why they haven't told Hermione about Blaise, I think she would have understood and that they could have trusted her with the information. Either way, I'm glad the others have talked it through and agreed to make more effort with Blaise.

LMAO - mums have their ways of finding out what they need to know, don't they? Fancy sending Tonks in so Narcissa could find out how Draco is going. I loved her explanation of what Andromeda was like and how Draco could understand why Tonks might be in awe of her mother. LOL And he's got to meet his cousin Teddy, how cute is that? DWAKE!!! LMAO - oh I can't wait to hear what the gang thinks of that! I love that Teddy jumped up and gave him a snuggle but not nearly as much as I loved Draco's realisation that perhaps he wasn't such a bad person after all. I hope Blaise isn't too upset that Draco is going to be late to meet him. And there you go, another awww moment since Draco wrote his mother a big newsy letter and finished it off with a very special 'I love you' (I'm sure he did look cute holding Teddy too.)

Hermione's turn for the big diary write up. LOL And oh, there's going to be a Halloween Ball - now I will definitely look forward to that. :) Interesting that Hermione has noticed Ron notice Pansy. Perhaps I didn't totally stuff up my guess after all????? And all those 'sighs' she wrote. LMAO Interesting that Blaise is still being a bit of a jerk, not that I expected things to change overnight just because he'd had that big blow up but I did think he'd settle down a bit more. She'd said he'd been quite reasonable so I wonder what triggered that little outburst????? LMAO at Vati and Theo (and how subtle of Greg to get them to say what they did, it might have been an out there statement but I'm sure that's how Greg intended to push them together anyway). :)

Aww poor Millie, now you've gone and made me feel sad for her too. She would never come outright and say she likes Greg, she's much too proud and I don't think Greg's likely to notice either, he does still like Hermione even if he's accepted the relationship they have. I hope the girls get together and give her a bit more of a confidence boost too, but for her own sake, not to attract male atteniton if you know what I mean. LMAO on the old musical chairs game - this will be a laugh. And LMAO again for Millie yelling out to pick the seventh years next. And Draco and Hermione ended up at a table together - now isn't that a surprise??? ;) LMAO

Oh gawd, Blaise and Harry together, and they won't be impressed when they see our leading pair together either. A blank look from Ron?? SO he's thinking deeply about something then. :) And wow, I was expecting Draco to say his favourite colour was blue because of Hermione's dress but the 'many shades of brown' - well it's a good thing I'm not a diabetic, that was just too sweet. LOL
schedule February 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
what i love about this story is that it's not only a draco/hermione fic, but a draco/hermione, hp/gw, ron/pansy, patil/nott, i love it!

cant wait for more
person Jullsy
schedule February 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
He excused himself and they talked a little bit finally :). He was so sweet.
Sex doesn't always mean romantic, but I have a lot of hopes for their first kiss... Your story is the light in my busy days with the moving. hugs
person kazfeist
schedule February 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. Loved Draco's favorite color, and his apology was super. As was the vignette with Teddy. I'm so glad the Lupins have lived in your story. Can't wait for more. :D
schedule February 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A quick note this time, because I'm really trying not to go to bed so late... I love that you brought in Teddy the way you did. Watching people around kids can be a very interesting way to get a sense of who they are and I loved Draco's inner reaction. Sending lots of smiles your way, as always. :)
schedule February 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM