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That was sssssssoooooooooo hot. Poor Snape can't 'keep it in his pants' and poor Harry, as usual, does not have a clue. can't wait to see the next chapter.

now i really really want more of this one! Please update soon *kisses*

Good start.

This is excellent and has sooooo much potential. I can't wait to read more. ;)

mmm really good can you please send me an e-mail when you update please.

Wow! What an amazing first chapter! I really like the way this is starting out! Yum, and vampire Sevvie is always a plus! I can't wait for more!

Wow, Harry's not going to be happy about this. Or, well, I guess I hope he's not. I hate stories where Harry 'gives in' or 'falls in love' too fast or too easily. I don't understand why the author would give up such a great opportunity for more conflict and action.
What about Snape? How does he really feel about all this? I mean, it's pretty obvious he wants Harry because Harry is HIS bondmate, but is he happy about the fact that his bondmate is Harry?
I get why you're moving Harry into Snape's quarters, but isn't this cover story a little weak? I mean, at least 4 other students passed out in the potions lab but none of them appear to be moving in with a teacher for observation.
Can't wait for the next chapter. You've picked up on one of my favorite themes, and I get the feeling you'll do a great job with it.

I like the beginning of this. Please continue.

Quick clarification? Was that Harry saying 'get away from me' at the end or was it Snape? Because depending on the answer it could completely change the scene's meaning.

Jules, Harry says 'Get away from me'. If you read just after it, it goes to say that he screamed it covering his injury on mouth. Harry was the only one to get injured, so he could therefore be the only one. However, I changed it to his name just in case it confuses others. Thanks for pointing out it could be confusing.