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for Blood Bond

by freakenbree

person Anon
schedule November 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A little shorter than usual but very good - you did magnificiantly writing from Snape's point of view, you seemed to really convey his conflicted emotions and his whole perspective came across very well written and realistic. Lol, not sure why you worried, it was great. I'm not sure how emotive it was though, at one point I thought he didn't seem too guilty for what he did, then I realised he still kind of hates Harry, so it probably makes sense. Look forward to more.
person alma
schedule November 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter, I liked Snape's POV!!!
person Darkless
schedule November 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WhooooooooHOOOOOOOoooo!!!!!!
schedule November 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ooh I like this very much, it doesn't bother me too much if a relationship progresses fast or not cause it usually slows down further along with the story. Looking forward to the next chapter
schedule November 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I do love a good Snarry story with a vampire twist. :)
person jljaina
schedule November 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very interesting story so far. I wonder what Snape is thinking now after kissing harry...
schedule November 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant
person alma
schedule November 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good chapter.
person Anon
schedule November 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Erm - I really love you stories, I really do, but they seem to follow a very distinct pattern. In all three you seem to have 'force Snape/Harry together, forbid Harry from doing much (especially touching anything), then introduce a third party who threatens to spoil the relationship and harm Harry, Snape saves Harry, then they realise they're in love, the end'. Not that it's a bad formula, just it gets a little. . . same-y. I've seen certain phrases, scenes appear in all three stories, you know?

Anyways - love the whole vampire plot, it's quite interesting and a bit different to the other ones that are out there, and it's a very well-written story too, you have talent. Look forward to more.
person wynja
schedule November 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW! Great story! Looking forward to more!