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December 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i am so glad you didn't make HG pregnant. its so cliche. its refreshing to see the character in a more realistic light. so often, authors make her pregnant in order to force conflict into the story. there are so many other ways to do that. i really like your writing style. in fact i love the whole concept of the story. the little thing about the ring is genius. it is a perfect illustration of an ill fitting off colored beginning to a romance. i love that through the letters there sham relationship has a better chance of being deeper than the others in the story. i would love the read more interactions between hg and the "working girls." i want toe see how there expanded world views effect Hermione. ii have checked 4 times in the past 2 days whether the fic was updated. i like it that much!
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December 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOWWWW!!!!!! Great story. Please update soon, pretty please.
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December 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good job so far, I love it! Can't wait for more.
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December 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is coming along so nicely. The two gradually warming up to each other after everything is very well done. Quite an original storyline, please keep it coming.
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December 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Like? Thinking that I might love. And I am suprised by the originality, the time-period... the beginning. I can't wait for more.
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December 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
to bad she isn't pregnant, although the time is not right for them. This is kind of different, but is coming along okay. I get the feeling that this is an old type of period piece, which is hard to think as a magical story also. I am liking it though.
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November 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was great please keep going i love it.
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November 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to see if more of this story.