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for Best (Worst) Laid Plans

by portercm

schedule November 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is such a sweet, awkward story. I love the way things are going so fast and then suddenly Albus remembers that he's a virgin and asks to slow down. I love how he's not entirely sure what's going on most of the time. I love how Draco just takes control and never stops to ask about any of the important things that should come up in this sort of situation. The story ends on such a hopeful note, too, which is wonderful.