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this is really good! How can harry see the death gods? how old is he really or does he look short/young for his age? what about voldywart? and how powerful magicly is HArry? OOOOOOOOHhhh this is really intresting please please keep it up.

What an interesting read I can't wait for more chapters, your twist of 'Haruhi' being able to see Rem was amazing. Though it makes you wonder can 'Haruhi' see the Shinigami because of his magic or is it because of his meeting Tom when he was a year old, the possibilities are endless and each are very interesting.

You have an amazing story on your hands and I hope to read more of it soon.

Amu-chan xxx

Is Harry 24 years old here? A year younger than L, I mean the Death Note was set in year 2004 and Harry was born in year 1980; while, L was born in year 1979. Anyway, it make me wonder what Harry did in order to make L admire him, that sure going to be interesting to find out. Also, watch out for your grammar like: Independent Clauses and Dependent Clauses, and when to use the capital letter. Nevertheless, your have a nice plot and your description is very awesome, that I am almost giddy in reading more of your story.

Anyway, till next time you update again.