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Update please! I love HP/L pairings.

I love this story! Please update! You know all Harry has to do to get Light to admit to being Kira is to feed him some truth potion and force him to admit it. That'd probably force him to forget being Kira again and someone else can become Kira, maybe Teru? That could continue the story only L and Watari won't die.

so harry finaly became one huh. guess they had to take him seriously after what he did in the 7th book. well they should of in all of them actually but the ministry of magic are a bunch of incompetent asses. love it so far and i think you are doing a great job at combining the two different worlds quite nicely. keep up the good work.

This is certainly turning out rather interesting. You have some spelling mistakes but nothing to get upset over. I'm looking forward to your next chapter and hope you update soon.

WoW!!!! THat was awesome and perfect!!!! More please!!!

it would have made more sense if one of the conditions was like: you have to experience death (in harry's case he survived the death curs, but that doesn't have to be the only thing... an NDE - near death experience would work just fine...) there are probably plenty of people, wizards included who have technically been dead, ie. their hearts stopping, or they aren't breathing, but are brought back to life... CPR..and i'm sure there's a wizarding version of a defibrillator that would have been a more believable condition, since killing someone and seeing that person die is probably what most wizards and Aurors in particular have done during the war and in the line of duty

the first condition is a given, being born a wizard.. that makes sense

the second condition is... i'll give it an OK since seeing death and having experience in death being required to see the god of death is easily understandable... although you have to question, if that is not too simple a clause... i wonder if to see someone die and to watch yourself kill someone (in effect, seeing that person die) can be grouped together into the same clause?

the final condition... i'll just point to clause number 2 shall i?

on a personal note, i think it would be more plausible of no 2 or no 3 was replaced by an NDE clause while you just group seeing death and killing while watching that person's last moments into the same clause :D

(oh... won't harry be punished if he told muggles about the wizarding world? even if he was an auror, the state of secrecy should still be in effect on him...)

good story none the less, i loved the end of chapter 1! it paved the road to a great story and plot... keep up the good work and i look forward to the next chapter...

oops.. i was just reading through my first paragraph, and i didn't make much sense
what i meant was that there are plenty of people who have died and have been brought back to life by means of CPR and defibrillators and there is probably a wizarding version of a defib in St Mungos that could effectively bring people back to the world of the living...

So, this is where you put your story, I kept looking at your story in general section, but anyway, your story is still as awesome as every.

Question: How come Harry was able to tell the muggles about magic, when there is a law about telling secret to the muggles?

So, this is where you put your story, I kept looking at your story in general section, but anyway, your story is still as awesome as every. I also like how you portrait L personalities, it is almost the same as how I portrait him. I always think L as spoil, a lier (look at how he percentage Light as Kira, which is 5%, and I know he will not give out his deduction, when he is not 90% sure, see his a lier, but I still like him. You can read it in Death Note: How to Read 13.) , hate losing, and have to no social interaction to the outside world at all, and even his successors; Near, Mello, and Matt, did not see his face, they only hear his voice with voice filter on it.

Question: How come Harry was able to tell the muggles about magic, when there is a law about telling secret to the muggles?

it sounds great i hope to see more of it soon